Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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Deana (Chapter 173) - Sun 07 Oct 2012

Wow. What a reflection. Poor Kagome, she's feeling her lowest. Glad you updated though.


Loveyaa (Chapter 173) - Sun 07 Oct 2012

Sad day for Kagome but at least she has thought about it and is figuring out what has happened. Now let's see what she does next. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Midnight Song (Chapter 173) - Sun 07 Oct 2012

I'm confused and I like it. Not often I can say that LOL. I really can't wait to see more. ^_^


Pricila (Chapter 173) - Sun 07 Oct 2012

Welcome home!  ^.^. Thanks for all the chapters!  Poor Kagome, it's amazing how we when in a unrequited love get our hearts all caught up in the hopes that it'll be more and then reality hits we find ourselves in a self made hell.  My question is, is she trying to kill herself by either one becoming so numb that she is unable to get out and drowns or two she wishes to become ill to the point of death?  I'm kind of hoping that this is the point where Sessh makes an appearance and saves her from herself and from here forward we watch the relationship develop into something more!   Can't wait till the next chapter.  ^_^


Lumi (Chapter 166) - Sat 06 Oct 2012

I love the way you worded this chapter.


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 157) - Sun 30 Sep 2012

hahaha! I love how although Sesshomaru is basically torturing his bird-friend that it also shows how much he too is looking at Kagome. Maybe there's hope for him yet!

Thanks so much for writing.


InuLover (Chapter 101) - Mon 24 Sep 2012

I've been truly enjoying your fic, and apologize for not reviewing until now.  But, I just had to let you know how much I loved your introduction of Kagome! It was truly inspirational..and hilarious!!  LOL! It was the best intro I have ever read.  Thank you!  I really needed that. :D


InuLover (Chapter 165) - Wed 19 Sep 2012

Okay, I'm really confused, now!  Didn't Inuyasha just tell Sesshomaru and Minoru how Kikyo was resurrected by Urasuae, or not??  And, why would Kagome be hiding herself, crying, and pleading for mercy??  And, you also added as the last sentence in the previous chapter that "NO ONE NOTICED the human in their midst..."!?


Chie (Chapter 165) - Mon 17 Sep 2012

Yay, you're alive! I was worried for a moment, you know. :D

And YAY for plot development! Always a good thing to read! Keep it up, m'dear!


Mikazuki (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Sep 2012

Tihs is my most fvorite chapter - it's absolutely hilarious!


Lyra (Chapter 165) - Sun 16 Sep 2012

BWAHA. Can't seal a hanyou to a tree.  That she can't, that she can't...and her heart wouldn't be in it even if she could.  Hmm...I wonder what sort of nature Kikyou will possess...and how she will react to Ayumu's presence, for surely she isn't just going to be purifying people...and just as surely, he IS going to find her.  Inuyasha is an idiot...an IDIOT...but his idiocy in this instance brings him closer to his brother, who *knows*, who *understands*, what it is Inuyasha has done and why...and then of course poor Minoru is stuck on the fringes of that understanding and even explanation will not be enough to alter the course of his logical introspection.  And Kagome...poor broken Kagome, who must hear what she knew unheard, see what she knew unseen.  But at least now she can go forward, without looking back.


mangageek (Chapter 9) - Sat 15 Sep 2012

lol! Awesome desription of Sesshy


mangageek (Chapter 6) - Sat 15 Sep 2012

Okay so it is conneted, but I'm still a tiny bit onfused. Great story so far though.


mangageek (Chapter 3) - Sat 15 Sep 2012

I'm slightly confused, but I think I can understand. Are these non connected drabbles?


Loveyaa (Chapter 164) - Wed 15 Aug 2012

They do care...but let's see how well they show it. And how soon they find out bout the crying human in their midst. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Pricila (Chapter 164) - Wed 15 Aug 2012

Minoru, I don't know why reminds of Spock and how its all about logic and that even Captain Kirk has to help him understand the human emotion.  hehehe  Loved the chapter!  Now I'm wondering if the whimpering, slobbing, pleading human asking for mercy among their midst is. . . Kagome?  Althought she should still be in the future getting her clothes done, right?  I guess I'll find out in the next chapter and I can't wait!


Lyra (Chapter 164) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

Oh...Inuyasha you idiot.  I don't care about love OR loyalty, she's  A DEAD CLAY POT.  Plant a begonia in her and just move on, already.  XP  Regardless of how I feel about his idiocy, it's well written - the glory and decay of an era consumed by its own bloodlust, and there, on the edges, life-reality waiting, love and its attendent, despair.   And Sesshomaru does understand - but I still do not seem him condoning this - do not see anything redeemable about the shadow of Kikyou that tries to stake a claim on Inuyasha when she is not even a complete soul.  To follow Kikyou, now, is to follow Kagome - even if Inuyasha can't be her lover, can't contain the wholeness of Kagome's needs within himself.  There is, too, that growing hint of doom, hanging over Minoru; the inevitable end of his practical decisions. 

Well done!

MOAR!

<3


Saeko (Chapter 163) - Sat 11 Aug 2012

I am also very proud of you for the length of this one!

And I just want to say I like the direction you're taking with the boys. A lot of people have them getting back together but don't actually have them talking it out.

And I like the idea of Kagura with Minoru, it makes sense and I'd love to see it go further.

Keep up the good work! ^_^


Loveyaa (Chapter 163) - Sat 11 Aug 2012

This is quite an enjoyable chapter. Kudos on the length. The emotion behind it all as everybody holds back is great! I can't wait to see the relationships continue to unfold. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Pricila (Chapter 163) - Fri 10 Aug 2012

I love it!! Finally behaving like brothers and Sessh is actually upset with inuyasha's promise!  Love, love, love it!!


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