As always a wonderful chapter :DDDD can't wait to see what Kagome writes in the next letter and how Sesshomaru will react to her picture. They are so cute not realizing that a picture in a frame on a desk means more than friendship! :DD
i've got to say, your story is absolutely GENIUS! I'm completely loving it and i'm glad that it's getting closer and closer to the end of the war, though i wouldn't be surprised if sesshomaru managed to just jump straight to general before the war was over and end up on desk duty for the rest of it, that would probably definately annoy him but then it would keep him safe for kagome and give her a chance to confess face to face
once again, you are a complete genius and i look forward to when you next update
Another great chapter :D
My sisters birthday is the 17th of April.. so that's kinda coolies.
*would love to see a fanart of Sesshy's picture from this chapter*
I'm swooning here, girl. Going all aaawwwww over those two. Specially Kagome. Will she confess soon?
I'd tell you again that I love this story more and more but that would be repetitive, wouldn't it? <3
gah i jsut love this story its so romantic to me! *squeee's like a fangirl* picture time!
Half a year without hearing from him! Oh dear!
Nice, through the privations and difficulties they are experiencing, their letters are growing warmer!
Wow, this is getting really interesting. InuYasha is travelling the accustomed path of the wastrel and abuser by becoming worse rather than better. I guess Kagome will learn a hard lesson about who her friends really are.
What a sweet and interesting story. I continue to enjoy reading it.
I wonder if Sesshomaru will find out that InuYasha has actually been hitting Kagome? It will be interesting to find out. Sending his old Lt's bar seems very touching to me, and the gift of a scarf she knit herself that he wears every day is poignant as well...
I like this very much. Your portrayal of Kagome's mother and the relationship between Sesshomaru, his father, and his younger brother all ring very true. As in the first chapter, you have some issues with spelling and barbarisms, but not to the point where it is really a detriment to the story. Keep up the great work!
Interesting! I noticed a few typos or spelling errors, but nothing that interfered with the enjoyment of reading. In your first chapter, you introduced several interesting elements which I'm sure will ripen in subsequent chapters. I am a fan of the slow reveal! And since I come late to reading this fanfic, I have the treat of reading quite a few chapters all at once. I look forward to it!
awe i love this! it was a good update! i cant wait for more! ^_^ though the part sango said abotu not telling hima nd sometihng else happenings! MOU!
and inupapa >:l i really hope something bad happens to him he's such an arse!
GAHHHHHHHH
yay for updates..
but now i am already itching for more >.>
*is officially addicted to this story* can't wait for another update!
this last set of letters almost seems a bit flirty in a way, considering the topic, I'm kinda in love with that. either way another wonderful update :3 and i cant wait for more!
Rissa (Chapter 15) - Sun 14 Nov 2010
I love this story <3 and I absolutely adore how they're getting to know each other better through their letters, also yay jealous Sesshomaru even though he doesn't know he is 83
Keep up the lovely story
I'm crying.
The fact that Sesshomaru was put into a coma... I am happy that he recovered!
And for Inu-Papa! BAH. I want to smack him.
Update soon, please. <3
- Vou
blaire (Chapter 14) - Sat 13 Nov 2010
Once again a wonderful chapter :D i love how kagome has admitted her feelings :))) cant wait for the next one :DD
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