rocky start, but the second chapter is more interesting.
It is kind of cringe worthy that Yasha is an abusive husband in this story line, but that's the road you picked, and so far, you are doing a good job.
:D
I'm glad you're extending this story and I like the plot you've given it. Maybe Sesshoumaru needs to check with the council as to any youkai laws against abusing your mate. He also needs to let the council know his fears of Inuyasha abusing the future child and why. In fact, if they're only married and not mated, then they're not a couple under youkai law since marriage is a human thing. I just love the way Sesshoumaru is so tender towards Kagome.
Good job thus far. I'm anxious to read more!
There were a few little errors here and there, but nothing major. Keep it up!
Oooo, such awesomeness. Love this story - see where it may be headed, but I'll keep it to myself as I tend to let the cat out of the bag.
Glad to see it's going to be a little more than a two-shot! Looking forward to the nummies!
OMG, better than hot fudge ice cream cake...
Totally addictive.
And perfectly written, as well. I know you didn't mean to make this very long, but I'm enjoying this so much, I don't want it to end too soon.
Awesome story! Great premise, great writing style. I can't wait to find out what happens next, keep up the excellent writing!
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Sep 2010
OMG!!! This is so awesome so far! It is so unique! I am excited for the next update :)
Keep up the awesome work!
Very, Very nice.
I am already hooked, can't wait to see where this is going!
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