omg hahaha I was reading this while I was in the dialysis center with my grandpa and I was desperately trying not to squeal so loud (I think I failed when the companion of another patient next to us looked at me lol)
Cute Cute Cute Sesshoumaru and Kagome moment~!!! XD Awesome chapter~!! XD Can't wait for Kagome to introduce him to her family~!!
I read this story in... 2 days? I love it! I really do...
The Nishimiya family is the greatest, piggiest family I have ever heard or read from! They are so stupid, it hurts even ME! I would die for that adorable Sesshy-Child!! And they?! *takes gun and kills Izayoi* I hated that woman already, because she gave birth to bitchyasha... -.-
I like it, how you described Sesshomaru, what it was, that made him so introverted. And I think, that is a very logical reason for his character development from the happy child to the aloof one. He is like always in the dark and then comes Kagome, the cute sunshine, and spends him the light to follow. Maybe for hope, maybe just for happyness, which I think, he deserves more than Shityasha oder bitchkotsu... You described their relationship wonderfully! She sees so many cute and beautiful things about him, that no one, until that moment, even bothered to see or know. Also, I enjoyed the Lemon. It was not the kind of lemon, in which Sesshomaru the se* machine is. And I like his...somewhat...clumsyness in it! :D
Oh, and the family gathering! WOW! Kagome did a very great job in putting these money eating creatures to their places. And I died laughing at Inuyasha, as Kagome threw the soup at his shi*face... xD
And I enjoyed it, that you tried to make Inupapa to be a good man, and let him still be "himself". I can imagine, that he wanted for his son to be happy (and royally screwed it up).
But I am wondering about something. Kagome did not call her mother by her cell phone? Or did she do that without you writing it? Does her mother already know, that she is married to Sesshomaru? Oh, I can't wait for that chapter! I can't wait to see, how Sesshomaru will react to the very warm and loving family of Kagome. :D
I believe, this is the longest review I EVER made in english... please, excuse the errors... xD But I think, you deserve to get a longer review from me, since I did not review the other chapters... (I simply couldn't wait to write, for I wanted MORE chapters... xD) I really devoured this story!
And the wife- husband waterfalls... that is just so very romantic....
Please, update soon!! And I will try to review every chapter!! :D
cheers
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