It was interesting 

I love Fruits Basket, but that woman that runs the onsen is seriously messed up (well so is that branch of the family...) LOL

Three if you counted Jaken... I can't stop laughing. BWHAHAHHAHAHAHA

I feel like I missed something. She was upset that Sesshomaru wouldn't mate anyone, then she offered herself but he said no... Someone had a dream? A bite, Sesshomaru transforms and Kagome sleeps for 2 days? I'm confused. He didn't like her so why would he tie himself to her?

i really enjoyed your story  :)

what is the word game that they're playing? i've never heard of it!

This story is interesting, but you have a lot of original characters with little depth and almost no description of what they look like besides their hair color. I actually kind of like your writing style, but even that isn't consistent it depends on your beta. I know this story is mad old and you probably won't see this, but just in case you're still lurking around or whatever. 

You do a really great job of portraying Sesshoumaru's thoughts without making him seem like a neurotic, "human" mess. Everybody's in character too so far 

Yo... Kagome needs to get a grip. She wouldn't like it if Sesshoumaru attempted to dictate how to raise Shippou. She's very indignant in this story. It's bordering on irritating. 

Wow. Inuyasha is a punk for sending Kagome out to do his dirty work. And Kagome's a doormat for agreeing. smh

omg that just pissed me off and made me wanna cry at the same time how dare they i love sesshoumarus hair!!!! but it does go with how things was in the past long hair was shown as part of status *sigh* still T_T....

awesome story you got here, very interesting concept of transfering the beast as one mates or gives birth. :)

I LOVE IT!! Me super encanto!!

toda esta semana entre levantarme y leer unos cuantos capitulos, luego en mi lunch y en mi break....estuve todos estos dias pegada a mi cel leyendo y disfrutando de este hermoso fan fic!

mil gracias por compartirlo!

you are really amaizing!

desde mty n.l. te mando un fuerte abrazo!!

Great story and very well done. Thanks!

It was a great story beginning to end and I'm gonna miss it now that it's over.

You did an excellent job the whole way through!

I will reread it in the future I'm sure.

I look forward to more of your work!

~Starfyre

Wow!! I can't believe it is over. It was quite the ride, but they all make it through (with the power of love <3) I like that you had them all grow as characters throughout the story and yet still stay true to themselves. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

Lovely fic .... lovely ending ...

thank you author for writing this beautiful storyyy...

loved it and gonna miss it :)

This story was amazing and awesome, and I enjoyed it!

That was a good story, I'm glad I stayed for the whole thing. :)

esta historia me agrado mucho tienes mucho talento y muchas  grasias por escribirla