I must say, this is the first time I'm ever reviewing a story I've read.
The reason being, as good as a story has been, I've never felt the need to comment on it, -however-
Reading your story has forced me to click on the 'review' button and post something to you.
Not sure if you will ever read it or what not, but I have to let this out.
Normally, I am not fond of 'unnovel-like stories' So, when I found out yours was more so a story told through blogs and emails, I was tempted to hit the 'back' button.
But, I'm compelled to give everything a chance and DEAR GOD I have never laughed so hard over a story in my entire fan-fiction reading life and I've read many over the years.
Everyone was completely OOC and I absolutely loved it. Even though I knew no one was truly like that through the anime/manga series, but just picturing their actual forms, through your description of situation.. I fell out of my chair, quite literally, with laughter.
It reminded me so much of myself, awkward geek that I am and how I strive for love. (Happily engaged now to my own geek-god) ^_~
I read several chapters over and over again and unlike most others, I plan to read it all the way through again and again. Re-reading things only seem to make it all the more funny.
I'm favoriting this story and I plan to look you up to read more. I expect great things from you! Make me laugh more. Hehe.
MiharuLi (Chapter 19) - Sun 29 Aug 2010
That was a great Fic.... I really enjoyed it. Tnx for your hard work. Hope to see more of you here at Dokuga.
Miharu
cryingcarebear (Chapter 19) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
OMG i feel the need to made those letters much bigger to show my absolutely HAPPINESS at this story is I 'squee'ed. It's very embaressing >.> I completely positively LOVE the story and am completely aware of how much of an idiot this is making me sound like.
Vrey (Chapter 19) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
I was on an island for 3 weeks. 3 LONG WEEKS By the second week.. all that could be done on said island, had been done. THANKFULLY i managed to hack my nook (those weird ebook thingies) and found i could convert my FAVORITE fanfiction into little books. I decided the best route to take was to download all of the Contest winners because surely they were worth reading (not that there aren't great undiscovered works out there). Of course i had to download the greats by StrikingFalcon (avid Spark reader) and then your work just HAPPENED to be under one of the files >_> I didn't get to it till the final week [were i much resembled a monk in meditation.. movement meant friction which created more heat which = death.. so reading was all i had]. Let me reiterate that the power on said island was out a good 4/5'ths of the day.. I think the moment i fell in love was where Nara to the ku invited Sesshy over for Haagen Daz and Total Eclipse of the Heart.. It made that last week in hell bearible. I make it a habit.. no a RULE to not read unfinished works on the off chance that it permanently becomes unfinished.. (i wasn't aware when i downloaded this that it wasn't done) funny how fate works eh? Let me just get down to the meat of this, i only write reviews when something has beyond struck my fancy. In fact your fanfic was stuck in my head for the past 2 weeks.. so to my suprise i find that its now finished. . . . and i love it all the more. The little things really got to me, changing of Narakus signature, to the utter otaku-esque references, and the simple portrayal of a little mary jane gone wrong ;) Let me be one to wholeheartedly congratulate you on a piece of work that literally had me laughing out loud on an island where the natives spoke another language. Stifflng my laughter at one of the MANY witty comments you wrote only ended with more laughter at the utter silliness of said situation. Congrats once again ~ rest assured that your fic will sit side by side in the Vault of Classics along with other greats like Chained to You , To Bear Witness, Cross of Blades, and other works great enough to be read again. (and yes i had to forward a link to my friends.. it would be selfish of me to keep your humor to myself) -bows- congratulations (x3)on a fic well done -winks-
Ellie (Chapter 19) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
How wonderfully clever! I read you entire fic in one sitting... and now I think i've gone cross eyed. Thanks!
Ellie (Chapter 12) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
LOL I love this! Inuyasha and Naraku... wow poor Sesshy!
Ellie (Chapter 5) - Wed 18 Aug 2010
LOL @ Total Eclipse of the Heart! I love Naraku in your story... he reminds me of an ex boyfriend of mine from high school. That was over 12 years ago! Thanks for the flashback and btw... there is NOTHING cookie dough and bonnie tyler cannot fix!
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