Reviews for Cybernetic Mishap by Aki

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Oroyukae (Chapter 12) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

You know what they say; Short, but Sweet!!!!!AAAAHHHHH! My addction has now been sated, kind but wicked creator of this absolutely delightful work of art! I cannot wait for the moment when Sessho-baby actually realizes the implications of Kagome's words. Of course, the shock would have to wear off of the whole Naraku and Yasha thing. LMAO! I simply love the way you have portrayed Naraku in this; it is refreshing and new, as i have not read a fic where he has been written this way. Usually he's cruel, malicious and creepy. So nice! I wish I had your talent for writing humor; whenever I make an attempt, it just does not work and I sound stupid. You are truly a master of tickling the funny bone lady. I shall await my next 'fix' whith great anticipation and will try not to hound you for one, though I cannot make any promises. CIAO! 


RayRay (Chapter 12) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

OMG hahahahahaha I can't stop laughiiiing. Poor Sessho-baby, I so knew Nara-boo would ask if he wanted details ;) haha! My favorite parts would be Sessho-baby's reaction to Kago-baby's note and then her e-mail to him about his virginity thanks to Nara-boo telling her. Btw, I challenge that bid >.> *wants me some nerdy Sessho-baby, hellz to the yes!* Anywhooooo, love love looooved it and I soooo can't wait to read more...and damn it, now I want to play Dragon Age! D: <3 Loooove ya Akiiiii-luff!! <33 XD


Asuka-sama (Chapter 12) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

Omg. I think that was your funniest chapter yet. I kept cracking up, and my roommate is looking at me like, "What the heck are you laughing at?" XD

I couldn't think of a more perfect way of Naraku and Inuyasha coming out of the closet. Poor Sesshomaru. I did feel sorry for him in this chapter.

I can't wait to see what you have planned next in the next chapter! Update soon! :D


NanashiTenshi (Chapter 11) - Wed 27 Jan 2010
LMFAO!!!

Anna (Chapter 11) - Tue 26 Jan 2010

OMG!!! Laughed soo hard every chapter i fell off my bed multiple times from the images running through my head. I am thoroughly enjoying a nerdy shessho and a high kagoo lol. Keep up the brilliant original chapters:)


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

XDDD  Have I told you how much I love Naraku in this fic?

Well, I do. X3


RayRay (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

O...M...G...!!!!!!!! XD I CAN'T BREATHE AKI!!!! You made me laugh so much I'm in tears and I must be hypervenaliting! Omg omg omg omg!! So hilarious, which should be expected considering it's from Nara-boo's perspective (i went there! D: ) anyways! omg just seriously wow. I loved what happened between Sess, Kagome, and Kouga, it's hilarious and xD the end note from Naraku to Sesshomaru, made me yell "I KNEW IT" outloud xD weird looks galore I swear! ANYWAAAYS so my review is late (BLAME BABYSITTING T-T) and now I'm telling you :D I love this story, it always brightens my day when there's an update! Much love to you until next time :) I can't wait to read more! <333


The Talentless Hack (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

I have to agree with Naraku (btw, his characterization?  EPIC.  XDDDD): I want to marry the BEAUTY that was this chapter.  I had been thinking about this story the other day, and lamenting a little because I wished there was more interaction between characters "irl," so to speak (don't get me wrong, though--I like the way you're going about telling this story, because it's a new way of doing it and I appreciate old wine in a new bottle), but this chapter made me forget I ever had any kind of lament.  It's so much better to picture Kagome and Kouga's showdown at Naraku's over passed out drunk Sesshou-baby in my head.  >:3

I love how hopeless Kagome & Sesshou are, and how GEEK-tastic Sesshou is.

Overall, this story = EPIC WIN

Okay, I'm done gushing.  One question, though: will "Nara to the ku" be making another appearance?  Because I f-ing love him.

Thanks for this story, Aki!  :D


Kira (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

i was so laughing my butt off at the end!

Seeing, even mentally, sesshoumaru drunk off his butt and kissing kouga to get kags to think him hot? oh, wow! Just...WOW! lol, and i love narakus names for everyone! Sesshou-baby, and Kago-hunny, so KAWAII! >_<

I love the way this has been going, this is really way up on my favs list! Lol. i hope to see a journal from sesshy next,we haven't heard from him in a while! lol!

And CONGRATS on your 10,000 reads and your 120+ reviews! you deserve every one of them!

Update again SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!

(What do you think about kags finding a fanfiction sight? with her and sesshy's name on a story, made by naraku? i just had that though, doesn't it sound promising? lol!)

~Kira


Hoshi Phoenix (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

rotflmao! this chapter had me cracking up soooo bad! great job! can't wait to read the next chapter, you've got me on pins and needles now! :)


Jenn (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

Like OMG!!

at first i thought i wasn't gonna get into this story much, but i was WRONG!!

it has me laughing the whole time, and i've finally gotten to the point where i don't care that people stare at me when im reading your lates chapter. :D

i cannot wait for the next chapter, and sessho-baby reads what's on the stickies!!

 


Chaos (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

Your story, ftw.


Crescent Dreams (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

Oh.  My.  GOD.

 

I had favorite'd this story a couple weeks ago before I went off to work and forgot about it until I'd gotten an update.. I was only on chapter two at the time.

And, I repeat myself.

Oh.  My. G-O-D.

This story is like crack.  I love it.  The e-mailings back and forth are my favorite.  Naraku being gay?  Of course.  Inu being gay?  LOL.

Anyway.  Keep on comin' with the updates, because I was laughing my ass off every chapter.  I can so relate.  Mostly to the typing style and the always-on-overdrive type of way Kagome writes.  xD.  It's great.


Btw.  Are you sure your beta's not just laughing her ass off with the story too, because each chapter I kept finding errors?  Oh-thee-well.  I suppose with a crack fic grammar isn't that important.

 

Until next time!


Angelicatt (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

Holy batshit!!! Naraku is screwing Inuyasha....EEEWWWWW...figures though!!! Aww, Kouga got his ass kicked by the nerd loving Kagome...I love it.


NewKitty (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

*wipes tears from eyes* That. Was. Priceless!!!

I rarely leave my comments for any of the fanfiction sites I visit (I can count the times on one hand) and I've never left a review on this site before (I visit this place daily). HOWEVER, this fic is exceptionally extraordinary. I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next installment.

But no rush...

take your time...

really entertaining writing takes time.


Sessygurl (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010
0.0 wow! If it couldn't get better. Narakus journal and the whole interaction with everyone. And the notes at the end thank you.

Darcy (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

Say it isn't so Nara/Inu...oddly in this story...I love it!!! Oooo drunken Sesshy!! I can't wait for the next chapy!The plot thickens!..>.< I can't wait for Sesshy's reaction to Kags,the kiss,Nara/Inu..and the awsome hang over!! >.<


Asuka-sama (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

Omg. That chapter was like a roller coaster! I was LMAO the entire time!

Awkward Turtle!!! I say that ALL the time. XD

Good for Kagome for beating the crap out of Kouga. Sesshomaru is going to be sooo embarassed when he finds out what actually happened. Lol!

Well, I can't wait to see what happens next time! Update soon! :D


ka_ren (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

wtf naraku's doing inuyasha?!?!?!

plz update soon


Horseprincess (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jan 2010

This is the very very best! :) keep up the awesometastic work!


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