YES!!! TEAR HER A$$ UP!!!! She hurt Sesshoumaru with her indecisiveness on whether or not to give Inu up, just like Inuyasha hurt her with his. Sitting there saying "If only you were Inuyasha". Ooh i hope you serve it to her good before you let her back into his good graces.
Sorry for not reviewing before this. I really like this story, but I'm finding myself getting angrier with each chapter. Can I bitch slap Kagome now? I mean, really? How pathetic! You would think that after breaking up so many times with Inuyasha, that she would grow up, get over it and move on. But, no! I can't believe she said that to Sesshomaru! It was bad enough that she came onto him to get him to not say anything or do anything to Inuyasha after he hurt her, but, then to tell Sesshomaru "If only you were Inuyasha"?! GAH!! I just want to strangle the girl!
And, I'm sorry but Sesshomaru should have just got up and walked away and not come back after the incident, and, especiallyafter this last one.
Okay..."taking deep breath"...sorry about the rant..hehehe! :D Gotta go see what the next chapter brings..hopefully smiles? instead of anger? :D
Darrakk (Chapter 2) - Fri 02 Jul 2010
By all that is Holy!
I want to strangle Kagome! This is soo good, loving the angst. And hating it. So. Much.
Please tell me Kagome dies horribly and terribly, Inuyasha/Kikyou break up with Inuyasha's reputation being ruined for all time, and Sesshoumaru wallowing in angst for years before moving on.
I think this story is going to wind me up so much its not funny, any light and fluffy fics you'd recommend for after?
WOW BRILLIANT WORK!!!
Emmy (Chapter 20) - Sat 26 Jun 2010
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!!! Really good!! I know I don't read a lot of fanfics so I can't really say this is as a fact, but you don't come across many fics where the girls is like... in the "bad guy" position as much and gah~ ok. speechless but yea, really good!!!!
I read this one on FF.net and I cried on various scenes T.T
You really know how to touch a reader's heart! That is the type of writing I'm aiming to perfect and you did a really great job with it~!
I love how you portrayed Sesshoumaru on this fanfic. It made him live more! It's like his feelings were being passed on to the reader and I just feel what he's feeling. It's so REAL~
The story is realistic. And there are lessons to be learned on this fanfic.
Excellent! You are an excellent writer~
keep it up! I hope to read more touching stories from you~ >.<
Amiee (Chapter 20) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
Such an inspirational story. I could read this story over and over again and never get bored with it, thats how much I loved it. You are an AMAZING author, and you inspire me to start writing. Please don't ever stop writing, you are truly talented and I can tell how passionate you are about it.
- Amiee
Sweetz (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Jun 2010
Wow i must say u have caputured my heart. This story u have wrote, has made me decide to join this web, get an account. I want to read all ur stories and become your number one fan. As painful as it is to see Kagome go through all of this, i get what it is that u're doing. I dont mind, i mean we cant all have what we want. and u are being real, showing that relationships arent all fun, games and happily ever after, u are showing that u have to work to get even close to that dream. I dont know if anyone has told u this but THANK YOU for writing this awsome stroy. Had i knownb, i would have been on this website ages ago. Look out fot me, my account name will defiantley have "sweetz" in it, im coming to a story near u....................... uhmm well ima be reading ur stories lol. please keep up the excellent work, u wonderful writer :D
Sweetz (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Jun 2010
Ah I simple love this story
Akay (Chapter 20) - Sat 15 May 2010
Well... I certainly wasn't expecting that, however I enjoyed reading the story anyway. I thought what Kagome did was really brave and nice. She didn't have to talk to Kikyo and for a moment I was worried on that part, but I felt that it gave her some kind of closure. I'm happy that she got to get away to you know figure life and things out on her own. And I'm happy that fate brought her and Sesshoumaru back together. I do wonder though... how would the family have reacted to seeing her again. Hmm... one may never know. *huggles*
oh sorry, i didnt finish..but reading this really let me see another perspective
and i never knew how much hurt there really was..i was so mean for blowing it all off as nothing and only seeing myself...
thank you so much for writing this great piece. <333
this is...too fantastic.
i know this sounds weird, but this is like the exact scenario that me, this guy and my best friend were in a long time ago.
as i'm reading this, its so spooking and makes me wanna cry.
my best friend was exactly in sess' position...as sad as it is.
the sad thing is...we never got that happy ending since i never saw him that way...
ashleekyle (Chapter 20) - Fri 23 Apr 2010
Miss Teak,
All I can say is wow (yet again.) I am completely taken aback by this story. You are so right the depth of human emotion in this one fic is astounding. I am truely impressed. I have enjoyed it very much. I feel like I have taken a roller coaster ride and very deep look at myself and the people around. I have never been in this perdicment, but I am a very empathic person who tends to experience others emotions (whieter out of selfishness or selflessness i don't know.) This fic has taken me on that journey with them. I don't know where to being. You have done an amazing job because we all have grown from reading this fic. Life is full of so many surprises and you have captured them all. My cousin and I had a discussion resently over what we like our endings to be in stories. I enjoy the Happily Ever After type and she enjoys the more realsitic Bittersweet, I think you blended the two really well. This fic deserves all the awards in the world and you should feel very proud of this work of art.
thank you for writting it,
ash
PS I totally can't spell
sorry
ashleekyle (Chapter 20) - Fri 23 Apr 2010
Miss Teak,
All I can say is wow (yet again.) I am completely taken aback by this story. You are so right the depth of human emotion in this one fic is astounding. I am truely impressed. I have enjoyed it very much. I feel like I have taken a roller coaster ride and very deep look at myself and the people around. I have never been in this perdicment, but I am a very empathic person who tends to experience others emotions (whieter out of selfishness or selflessness i don't know.) This fic has taken me on that journey with them. I don't know where to being. You have done an amazing job because we all have grown from reading this fic. Life is full of so many surprises and you have captured them all. My cousin and I had a discussion resently over what we like our endings to be in stories. I enjoy the Happily Ever After type and she enjoys the more realsitic Bittersweet, I think you blended the two really well. This fic deserves all the awards in the world and you should feel very proud of this work of art.
thank you for writting it,
ash
PS I totally can't spell
sorry
Awwwwwww! I'm so emotional right now @,@. Yes, I cried. BUT, not because it was sad it was just so.. ah.. loving. I love it. Felt as though their feelings were my feelings at first seeing each other after so long of being apart. I totally share their feelings becuse since Al and I were long distance for a while after a year of our first visit I saw him again and I just had this overwhelmed emotion of seeing him again. It felt so good. I'll never forget that feeling. =] This just brought it to light once again ^-^ Thank you, Teak-chan for bring back one of my favorite memories =D btw.......... YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. Plox keep writing!
Angela (Chapter 20) - Fri 23 Apr 2010
man the ending was soo sweet! ^ ^ and i loved the way emiko said sesshoumaru! ^ ^ kyaa! so cuuutttteee! ^ ^ SHOSHOMAWOOOO!
Thank you so much for the dedication, I am honored. This was an excellent end for this fic. Kagome did move on and grow up but she never forgot to send a postcard to Sesshoumaru. It showed she didn't forget him and he move on too, never forgetting her. How perfect for them to meet up in the same place after so many years apart. It was definately meant to be.
And I agree with you, this was based in reality where so many of us got caught up in discussing and debating it, more than reviewing it but that made it more interesting, for me anyway, to see what so many other thought.
You did a really great job with this and look, you completed a multi chaptered fic. I'm proud of you, Little One!!! Love, hugs, and kisses, JEN
ashleekyle (Chapter 8) - Fri 23 Apr 2010
Sadly I must say I have jst started reading this story as you completed it, but I guess yeah for me I get to read it from start to finish. I was reading star-studded and could not stop myself from reviewing now. I was planning to wait till the end but oh well. I have never read a story that has villianized Kagome to this extent, and it is freaking awesome. I was so with you when you saided pay back is a witch. I definetly agree and she is as much to blame for this mess as Inuyasha and I hope they both get there dues. I cann't wait. I am so happy Sess moved on but actually jst has a rebound chick but hey do it good on the rebound, a celeb. You go boy. Love the plot and characterization so far. I even feel bad for poor Kikyo (and that is saying alot)
Dear Miss Teak:
This was such a beautiful ending to a wonderful story! It was indeed filled with so many emotions and saddly it reflects what many people suffer in life when involved in a triangle (from Kagome's perspective).
I feel that as much as Kagome suffered, Sesshomaru suffered as well, and it was at times hard to see his quiet acceptance to his draw at luck, but the warm and tender ending more than made up for all of it!
I am very grateful that you choose to share this story with us, and I look forward to read other stories from you; I know that you are currently working onanother and I will be moving onto that one to enjoy more of your writing.
I wish you the best of luck in all your endeavors, and hope your muses continue to inspire you to write some more!
Once again, thank you for sharing and congratulations on a well written story!
Best wishes:
MidCat
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