I bsolutely adore your writing, and I've been following your story for a while. You never dissapoint when the chapters come out, they are always very thought out, long, and immensely enjoyable to read. :3 If I could patent anything, I think I'd want Jiji's shit-eating grin to add to my smirk. Ah, the perfect arsenal.... Please update soon, and thankyou for the chpter!
Oh, and is kagome practicing the enhanced smell and hearing? Because it doesn't really specify after she told Shippo she hadn't got it to work yet. I assumed she was though...
Also, she is storing the youki of the food she eats right? Alongside her reiki, so is it still accumulating, or does she use it sometimes without knowing? Like when she's handling a demonic weapon? She depletes her energy stores by increasing her speed, but could she use her youki (well...not hers....yet) to do that? Or does she not know how yet, She's not aware of it but maybe subconsciously? ah, sorry for the million questions. Shutting up now. Thnx for updating!
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