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Pebbs (Chapter 20) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

That was great!  I too am confused on how someone could see this as two different stories.  There's so much character development, you couldn't really expect it to grow within the same story.  I get how Sesshomaru may be out of character though.  Somewhere in between all the nakedness or the several lovers?  ha, either way, the former was far appreciated *thumbs up*

This really gives Kagome the chance to really heal from losing her son.  And what better way then to do that with his father.   That was a good touch.  I would expect him angry as hell, and yet to see how it played out was far more interesting.  How does one who controls emotion so well grieve? 

They are permanently intertwined.  I look forward to what happens once they gather more distance between each other for the upcoming battles.  Room for more character growth, keep it comin'!! 

Thanks for the update.  Good luck on finals.  And feel free to treat us with more updates if you're tempted.  ;)  Honestly, I jumped and squealed when I saw your fic up on the first page!


TruGemini (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

LOL! She needs a camp counselor or something. The girl is playing a thin line and she may just get herself killed.

 

 


LM Bluejay (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Wow...good two parter you got there. LOL. I know what you mean with midterms and such...bleh, got one next Friday. But  we're college students and will prevail. can't wait for the next update! ^_^


ceres (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Well, I still can´t see Kagome and Sesshoumaru as a pair. He is violent with her and she acts schizophrenic. That he has so many lovers is also disappointing, I don´t understand why so many make him a pervert when he never takes notice of a woman and simply ignores them. This chapter was really weird. At least Kuro and Shippo acted as they are supposed to be.


Aimee (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

I love this story, it's got depth to it that makes it interesting. It's kind of like curling up by a window and reading a good book in a storm, you can't wait for the next bit but at the same time you want it to last, and I don't know who said it was like two stories mushed together but in my experiance most stories that are worth anything are EXACTLY like this, there is more then one plot line, more then one story, again, depth, you can imagine a whole new world unfolding in what you already knew. Hmm. I'm babbling, sorry! See ya next time!


stars (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

yes thank you please updata


aurora22 (Chapter 20) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Woohoo! Another chapter so soon! You know, Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship (or lack thereof) confuses me. So violent. Poor Sesshoumaru...found out about his lost child. :( And maybe he'd know who was pregnant if he didn't have so many lovers! Not sure I really understand the whole plot dealing with Hitomu...maybe i'm just not seeing it. Never really understood all that political madness. Ah well. Great chapter! Update soon again! :D


ceres (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Awesome! I love this Kagome and I´m glad that she´s back to her old self. It was really funny as she said that she tends to piss people off and I´m glad that she knows the baby is Kuro and that she will keep him; it´s really cute how affectionate she is with him.

It was unexpected that she´s going back to lead Taishi´s people. I´m really curious to what you´ve planned. Hope you can update soon but I don´t want to press you if you have finals.


dayna (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

I throughly enjoyed that chapter. It's too bad that Kagome couldn't get out of her duty but I think that this opportunity will give her the advantage she needs to take care of Kuro and meet with Sessy. That should be an interesting meeting. I am however still very confused about Kagome's son. I'm still wondering how he was a hanyou and Sesshomaru's from what I read in other reviews. I guess I was just missing something, so if anyone can please explain that to me I will be very greatful.

Will be waiting on the next update.


aurora22 (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Poor Kagome. Just one ordeal after another. Going back to the castle! Is that demoness that got recaptured going to be there? Kuro-chan has been discovered! Hehe. Are we going to see any of Sango and Miroku? Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update! Hope its soon!


kotainuchan (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

love  love  loooove this story!


chevonne knowles (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Wow she just can't get away can she.

This is so exciting I love this story so much.

It makes me think every time i read it.

I dance a jig and have a smile on my face.

Thank you for your effort. such wonderful story telling.


maribel mota (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

grate, just rate, the only thing i don't is that you opdate to slow, so try to do it more quikly 


TruGemini (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Wow! She was going to have to confront the situation sooner or later. Man, she seems like sje needs JiJi's guidance more than ever now. Keep up the great work!


stars (Chapter 19) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

please updata like tommorrow


ceres (Chapter 18) - Sat 27 Mar 2010

Well, I liked it. The only spelling mistake I saw is the males top which is called "haori" not horai. Is the baby Kuro? It is isn´t it? Why else should the baby have such a huge aura? I´m glad that Kagome is getting better and Shippo trying to help her as much as he can. Your ideas are really great.


Miss.Undo (Chapter 18) - Fri 26 Mar 2010

love it. please upddate soon i cant wait till she breaks the news to sesshy. ")


KEdakumi (Chapter 18) - Fri 26 Mar 2010

Great Story!  Can't wait for the next chapter!


GreyEcho (Chapter 18) - Fri 26 Mar 2010

I still liked the chapter. and YAY for Sin being back. And somethitng is up with the kid, right? Will be interesting. I'm excited to see how this sections ends.


Hesunohana (Chapter 18) - Thu 25 Mar 2010

I LOVE your fanfiction !! really ! I was so sad when Hitomu died. really. will Sesshoumaru learn he was a father, just fort a bit, one of this day ?


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