I liked it! most definately not your usual story. do you plan on making this a romance? and making them a true couple?

I would love it if you could make this story into an chapter story

Yes i do agree with you.This would make a great chapter story.Hopefully you can update soon. i like where your going with this story ")

Well, depending on what you plan for the future of their twisted relationship, you can either make this a psychological/emotional story or a dark one. Either way, I see this potential chapter-fic heading in several directions. I kind of like dark, possessive Sess. And this is probably the second AU fic where he is like this that I've read. This one-shot definitely has potential if effort is put into it. I say go for it. ;)

hel yes i wana noe wat happenz next plz dnt leave mii wit a cliffii plzzzzzzzzz =[

i think it would make a great chapter story, that is, if you're willing to do it! I would read it lolz! nice story line by the way. Thanks for creating!

LOVELY STORY DEAR! Loved it so so much! Fits the song perfectly!

I love this! I hope you do decide to make this into a chapter story...

I would be interested in reading more.

wow.... good story but still.... wow....