OMG! Sesshomaru is such a bastard. It's a shame how Inuyasha was taken out. On top of that, Kagome's contraceptive pills were switched with fertility pills. What's even worse is that that bitch Asuka's back. Well, I don't think she'll get anything else from Sesshomaru other than a painful death if she crosses him. This is another awesome fic. I feel bad for the poor wifey. Everything's been taken away from her: her family, her Inuyasha, her family company, her virginity, her freedom. What's next, her sanity? I want to see what happens. I had looked forward to Inuyasha coming back, but I don't think that's happening. But I do want to see Sesshomaru's parents come into play in this story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
JD (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Feb 2010
Your story is so awesome. I really do not know what more to say. The story has so much potential so far and the characters just get to you. You pity Kagome and hate Sesshoumaru but all in a good way. I am not sure if i am making any sense but keep doing what you have been doing.
Oh My Stars!! Please update soon, love your story!!
OKAYS. I know Sesshoumaru is being an A-grade asshole here, but I actually felt a teeny weeny tinge of pain for him when Kagome said "Not from you" to his question of her liking for children. That's...damn sad!!! And Asuka is evil *hurls rocks at her* I can sense the evilness coming, and Miwa dear, your story just keeps getting better!! I'm worried for Kagome now; the situation is turning out to be rather complex.
I really loved this chapter! Your writing style in general: When you choose an event somewehre in the story and then you ga 'Reverse!' And we're back in the past. I think I can even hear the bzzz of going bacwards.
Also, putting appart how sad the chapter is, I really enjoyd how most of the times, when you skipped forward it started with 'Kagome Higurashi glared heatedly at the handsome male...'
That'sa nice repetition. I'm also hooked up by the story line and I'll probably stay by to read more.
Ooooohhhh! So what does she want? Does she want Sesshomaru or just his money? Oh Miwa this is getting really good!
Angel (Chapter 6) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
wow so awesome cant wait for the next chapter
Vicky (Chapter 6) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
I feel sooo bad for Kagome...she has lost everything. :(
I don't know if this fic will ever deserve a happy ending, especially after everything Sesshoumaru has done to get her. I think it'd be a great turning point when he finally realizes love is about making your loved one happy regardless of the price.
Mina (Chapter 6) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
great story miwa! please update soon!!
Asuka is really a menacing character. It says a lot when Sesshomaru is being so bad, that I get worried every time that woman makes an appearance! And poor Kagome, I'm worried that she will try to kill herself. Everything has been taken from her, after all, and now to know how Sesshomaru has outsmarted her again, and got her friend to betray her, she has to feel like there is no hope left in life at all...
I love it please update soon!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sesshoumaru: “Say ‘yes’, when I ask you to marry me.”
Kagome: "No..."
Alternatively....
MissTeak: "YES YES YES YES YES YES PLEASEEEEE." *pounces on Sesshoumaru and pushes him onto the ground*
Dear Miwa, this was yet another excellent chapter! Sesshoumaru is extremely in character, and his manipulative and demanding words were so well-crafted. I would really feel like beating the crap out of him by now if I were Kagome, given how he had essentially pushed her into a corner with no alternative option. It was really too much! Well, if I were Kagome, I'd just marry him, lock him up in my closet and feed him cookies :)) Thanks for this 5th chapter of Black Rose; I am very interested to see how Asuka comes into the picture. Please update soon - and just to let you know, I am waiting for Ultimate Sacrifice!!
faby (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Dec 2009
I feel like crying yet I admire that Sesshoumaru can damge every one to reach Kagome.
I do believe your fanfiction is great, I do love your write-ing style and tone. It's very interest I like the darkness it gives.
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