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sailorv (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Apr 2017

I missed this fic! please keep updated!!


Deana (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Apr 2017

I'm so glad you're back. Great update!


Kanda (Chapter 10) - Thu 23 Mar 2017

well, this seems like an interesting story and it would be great to see where it goes! please update! you've gained another fan. :'D


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Mar 2017

I wonder what happens next I can't wait to read and find out!


J (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Dec 2016

hello i hope u continue this story 

it has good pacing and clarity

the characters are interesting 

and the story line is done excellently

 

can't wait for the next chapter


MissNikki (Chapter 10) - Sat 26 Nov 2016

I love your stories! I hope you updated this one soon!


Kate (Chapter 7) - Wed 20 Apr 2016

Hello,

I have been reading your stories lately, and I have greatly enjoyed them.  Your sense of pace and timing is very good, and I appreciate the balance you create between Kagome's intellect and nievete.  However, I have noticed a few words which are being used incorrectly.

First, the word comportment referrs to behavior and etiquette, not the expression of one's face.  A correct use of this word would be "The young lady's posture and comportment during the ceremony indicated her fine education and meticulous upbringing."  I believe the word you mean to use is countenance, which referrs to a person's face or expression.  For example, "Her countenance had confused him and he hadn’t known how to react."

Second, the word sensible is an adjective meaning "shows good common sense or purpose." Sensitive on the other hand, is an adjective meaning "having a strong experience or ability to perceive, easily hurt."  An apron on a cook or simple cotton clothing would be sensible.  You could also use the word in the context of a thought or action, i.e. "The young man indicated his sensible attitude by first creating a list of things which must be done and then identifying the priorities."

 

Keep up the good writing, and hopefully, you will take my advice on these two words.


Valasaurus (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Mar 2016

Beyond in love with this story and i can't wait for the next chapter! !!


Jean (Chapter 10) - Fri 18 Mar 2016

I really like how this story is going! You have done a wonderful job on your characters personalities. Hope you are able to update regularly! 


FireDragon (Chapter 10) - Fri 18 Mar 2016

Yay an update but it was very short. hopefully though there will be more soon? : ) I do hope so.  this is an interesting beginning.  Is this going to cause a problem?  I was just rereading this a little here and there and I noticed that the old yokai said so long as she isn't spoken for they had nothing further to dispute Sesshoumaru's choice.  But she is sort of spoken for. Interesting thought.


SesshyUchiha (Chapter 10) - Thu 17 Mar 2016

cant wait till next chapter!!


roberta. (Chapter 10) - Thu 17 Mar 2016

Just found your story sounds good can't wait to see where you take this. Hopefully you will update more than once every six years lol.


Corina (Chapter 10) - Thu 17 Mar 2016

Kurs aber lustig!

Ich hoffe das nächste Kapitel komm bald! 


channing (Chapter 10) - Thu 17 Mar 2016

Thank God a new chapter.  I have being wait forever. Thank you Thank you Thank you


Corina (Chapter 6) - Thu 17 Mar 2016

Wahnsinn! ........also, unsere Herr Sesshomaru wie immer söoooooooo  dankbar! 

  Super! !,


FireDragon (Chapter 9) - Sat 19 Dec 2015

I like this so far.  I hope you will continue it.  Thank you for sharing it.


wiiTneSs (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Amazing work. Kagome is hilarious! I can totally see her jumping to help someone despite being in the presence of 3 taiyoukais. Sayuri probably is  curious who's the woman who captured her ice prince son. I can't wait when sesshoumaru realizes there's no one better than kagome n tricks - tells her she needs to take responsibility. Haha. 


Alicia (Chapter 9) - Fri 31 Oct 2014

Please,, update this story...
I'll waiting coz its. Really good


Katrina Kee (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Sep 2013

Please put up the next chapter soon!


Chaos Ninja (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Jul 2012

Soooo... What happens next?!?!?!?!?!


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