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funny, oh what's gonna happen w/ Kagome.

OMG! I love this story. I giggled so much reading this chapter. Thanks for writing it. Please update soon.

I loved this chapter! The sniping between Kagome and the kitsune was hilarious. What was even funnier, was Sesshoumaru's reaction to the whole thing. For once his usual icy facade was missing. Now I can hardly wait for the reaction between him and Kagome.

Oh, this is good! Will Sess try to kill her or will he ignore her and expect Kags to follow him? Oh the scenes in my head are too numerous. I would just prefer to read another chapter seeing as those are better than what I think of. Please update soon. Oh, and I think that Kags should send the Kitsune a little shock just to warn his fuzzy ass.

Oh My God! I love this chapter. What will happen to Kagome now that she is alone with a pissed off Sesshomaru? I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

This is so very interesting! I wait with bated breath for the next installment... Great writing! Great story!

Great chapter! I absolutely loved the last scene! How I wish I was Kagome (with a lot of fire power though) I have to say though that you have a few beauty mistakes like spelling, punctuation and using the same words in one sentence. As a specific note, in Japanese there are no singular or plural words, this would mean that for example youkai can be either singular or plural on its own. One youkai vs multiple youkai. I do not know if you have a beta, but you could try and find one? They are also very handy as a sounding board for the fic. Do you have the story planned out? I am already beta-ing another story so I don't have a lot of time but until you find another one I would be happy to help for a little while :) My email is roos.peters@gmail.com if you want to talk :) Again, the plot so far is awesome and very original! That the evil person is a Kitsune was a really nice touch as well. Kudos to you! X Roos

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oh dear, just what has Kagome gotten herself into?

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*claps hands* that was really good!! :) i like it!! lol, i wonder what sesshy is going to do about Kags say that!! *squeals at the thought* YAY! i cant wait, lol. i can tell this is going to be a good story!

0.o well that was unexpected. Though not disappointing. I can not wait to see how Sesshoumaru takes the news though lol. :) Keep up the good work.

ahahah too funny great chapter wonder if what Sesshomaru will do or the other Loards for that matter

My gosh!!! it's like, "kagome,Oh GOSH", it's really good.

God bless Kagome!! Always acting before thinking things through. Now she's gained the kitsune and his sister as dangerous enemies. But she has such a generous heart to help those in need, even Sesshoumaru. This time, though, she's going to find that she may have taken on more responsibility than she thought. I'm eager to read his reaction to her statement, especially once they are alone.

good really good i can't wait to see the reaction of shessy^^; will he take the chance or blow it away because she is human... Please update soon you can't finish like that

Oh God, that was so exciting. What will be Sesshomaru's reaction to Kagome's declaration? Will he play along or will it back fire? The suspense is killing me. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Kagome's going to get herself into lots 'o trouble huh? I can see Sesshoumaru being angry not only at her following him but eavesdropping on private matters that are not her concern. Poor thing I hope satisfaction brings her back when he's through killing her.

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