ah... so he is really concern huh, so when are you going to let them enjoy the forbidden feeling ? it's forbidden alright, for sess to fall in love with kag, strictly forbidden... by his planet sized ego, humongus pride and iceberg coldness, it would be a real fun to see him falling from his so called 'grace'!!!

You'll never find me!  Bwuahahahah.  This is a fun story and I especially liked this last chapter because Sesshoumaru truly lost his cool.  It's enough to make me go back and read the whole story again.  ^_^  Also, thanks for the care you take with doing a good job preventing errors.

congrats on the last day of school!!! Mine was last year =)

so my dear what a good story, I look forward to reading more of it.

Congratulations!!  Obviously, your time in high school was well worth it, because this is one of the best, well-written stories I have read in a long time.  Keep up the great work..I look forward to reading more :D

has the spark started to fly?... love it, update soon!

Bloody brilliant! You are now my favorite person and writer. I have never seen Fluffy dear so greatly 'used' before. You have done an outstanding job making him and kagome just brilliant. Keep up the great work and ill be looking forward to the next update :)

 This whole ordeal of getting captured seemed like just a blip in the day-to-day mission of the Sessh/Kag quest, but the emotional implications hinted at here are huge. Don't get too ahead of yourself trying to move the plot along and cut the character development short! The whole capture and lashing seemed a little rushed. Sesshomaru's anger and care are kind of downplayed because you're rushing the plot-- we don't get a chance to take in these little developments because you're already moving forward. I'm really enjoying your story. While you've givin us yet another amazing chapter, I have to say I am really enjoying your little rhymes at the end. :D I look forward to your next installment.

Thanks for sharing,

Kyute

Jesus! I almost died laughing. I still think Kagome is too clutzy for Sess, but you have a very good sense of humor. If you're like this in real life your friends are never bored XD

Great unique writting style too! I wonder how you'd handle a more serious fic.

It is nice to read a story that doesn't one rush into the romance between the two of them, building it up so it's not like she's going from one brother to another. As well as the reasoning for them having to travel together is one that I have not read before. I find myself having a hard time guessing what will happen after they gather the weapon. Are they going to have to fight to get it? Will the story end once they get it?

Just a few thoughts for you, seeing how reviews are like chocolate right?

hi! I must say you compelled me to review with your awesome story thus far!

Hopefully you will emerge from your writer´s block brilliatly, also i love how you´ve

kept sesshy and kagome true to their nature and not fallin in love SUPER fast as in

other stories!!

GOOD LUCK

I've really been enjoying this story a lot. I look forward to your updates and hope you snap out of your writer's block quickly. I love how funny you've made both Kags and Sess.Please update often, I'll be anxiously awaiting.

p.s. I'm one of those people has has a really hard time with initimate scenes with <18 year-olds and 600+ year old men/youkai. It makes me feel like I'm participating in some form of child porn. :( Please age Kagome!

Besides that, LOVE THE STORY! :)

by the way, i just browse ff.n to find you fic there hoping you already updated in that site... yeah, i found it alright... updated up to chapter 14... i guess my luck had just wave me bye bye huh

i wonder why i didn't catch on this fic earlier? it was really awesome ... God! I'd be willing to drop in reviews every time i browse dokuga so that you would update just as fast... but that would beat the purpose of reviewing right... i really love the way you threw both of them into situation they couldn't simply hop off and be done, less the mushy goodbye and more to blood and gore... though i'm worried just how the lovely and brash hanyou would react, he will be tracking them now, wouldn't he? perhaps that was the maiden snatcher who is hunting them down, well, you don't actually would let the fight to be a one minute fight right, you did mention that he is one strong youkai after all. What about Kouga? would he come into the picture soon? i do love kouga as well, even though he is as brash, he is kinda handsome, and masculine! but still i love sessh the best, and second inu... what about izanagi, if you ask me, i wouldn't throw him back into the plot until the very end, it would only serve to aggravate both of our favourite character... and ME! by the way, if i'm not mistake it is not Taiyoukai - it's Daiyoukai... Taiyoukai means fish youkai... urghh... i truly can't imagine sessh being a Taiyoukai... A Fish Youkai! yeah, his dokatsu probably is the sea water mixed with apple vinegar... anyway, i love you fic and please update soon! 

You should update super soon!

Because this story is amazing!<3