Very good first chapter. I absolutely liked how you portrayed their feelings of loss and pain
| THANK YOU, LOVE THIS STORY, MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!    
 | That was a very sweet chapter. We'll see how much further they progress in the next one, right?    
 
amy (Chapter 11) - Mon 28 Feb 2011 | yes!    
 
amy (Chapter 10) - Sat 19 Feb 2011 | EXCELLENT START KEEP IT UP!    
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