I love how absolutely MORTIFIED Masaru looks in the background. It's nice that Kagome finallyy got someone to talk to who can give her actual insight about Sesshomaru's courtship of her. 5 years since the war started, seven years since he started courting her, I wonder if Sesshomaru left Rin with her because he acknowledged her as the Alpha of her own small pack before they all left. Let's be honest she's helped protect Rin before and he's seen her protect Shippo. Maybe it was because she was stil so young. Only 15 years old before she came back3 years later. I really enjoy the way Masaru cares about her as more than his charge but and wants to cheer her up and help her out of her depression. Having Makaira around will be good for Kagome. I wonder if she'll slip in some things she learned from Makaira into her letters to Sesshomaru. As always I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing! Can't wait for more! (but i will because I love this so much)
Kay (Chapter 41) - Wed 08 May 2024
Love this story. It has a great story line and is captivating to read. I also really enjoy the picture at the end. It added an great touch to the end
Kay (Chapter 41) - Wed 08 May 2024
Love this story. It has a great story line and is captivating to read. I also really enjoy the picture at the end. It added an great touch to the end
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 40) - Fri 03 May 2024
I love that Sesshomaru pleasures himself not with the image of a clean, together and tidy Kagome. But the boarderline feral, blood covered, WARRIOR Kagome. I'm also glad that Kagome finally stopped feeling so shy about her attraction and need for Sesshomaru. I bet she was furiously blushing the entire time writing her letter.
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 39) - Thu 18 Apr 2024
Oh our poor Kagome.... Sesshomaru you need to come back from war and hold her. Now!
L-desu (Chapter 39) - Mon 15 Apr 2024
Don't give up hope yet, Kags! You can make it through this! Love this story!
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 38) - Mon 08 Apr 2024
YES PROTECT YOUR GIRL! I kinda feel bad for Inuyasha though, he just didn't want to hurt her, but that's all he ends up doing. He needs more experience and has much more growing up to do. This was a little far but I completely understand where Sesshomaru is coming from.
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 38) - Mon 08 Apr 2024
YES PROTECT YOUR GIRL! I kinda feel bad for Inuyasha though, he just didn't want to hurt her, but that's all he ends up doing. He needs more experience and has much more growing up to do. This was a little far but I completely understand where Sesshomaru is coming from.
L-desu (Chapter 38) - Fri 05 Apr 2024
Ogods, cringe on the arm ripping...but such great descriptive detail!
CAL (Chapter 38) - Thu 04 Apr 2024
Woahhh, damn. That was primal and brutal and the realistic reaction of a daiyokai who's as ruthless as he is. Even if it's hard as a reader to witness the viscerality of that scene, his brutality is necessary. I don't believe ive ever read a fic where Sesshoumaru put Inuyasha in his place this demonic way before. Your storytelling is impeccable. I feel bad for Inuyasha. Paying for his inability to be honest with kagome with his arm is fucked. But he did put his hands on kagome and that's also unacceptable. I mean I don't know how kagome is going to react to finding out that Sesshoumaru debilitated him. She is human and will have an incredibly hard time reconciling his actions. I'm so curious if he'll write a letter to her about this or what will happen. Can't wait for the next few chapters. Thanks for all your hard work.
L-desu (Chapter 37) - Mon 25 Mar 2024
Awwww man, Inu, nooooo! Once again, we were mislead in his intentions (T_T)
Of course Kagome comes shining through again! Love it!
I am so excited to read what happens with Sesshomaru and Inuyasha! This whole story is so well written and the character portrayals are wonderful!
Love your writing!
Mary (Chapter 35) - Tue 12 Mar 2024
I'M SORRY WHAT?! Excuse me you can't have Sesshomaru be all cheeky and flirtatious and Kagome getting all flustered because she likes him to just end with, oh yeah by the way they fell asleep and the house caught fire. I hope Masaru and Shippo come save them soon
L-desu (Chapter 34) - Wed 06 Mar 2024
Sweet progress! Looking forward to the next letter about stripes! Damn, too bad she got the polaroid back LOL!
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 34) - Tue 05 Mar 2024
Oh? I'm so excited to see what Sesshomaru has in store for informing her of the locations of his other stripes. I also love how his beast is like yeah she wants to groom us she's ours now.
Gimmemore75 (Chapter 34) - Tue 05 Mar 2024
Oh? I'm so excited to see what Sesshomaru has in store for informing her of the locations of his other stripes. I also love how his beast is like yeah she wants to groom us she's ours now.
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 34) - Tue 05 Mar 2024
Me gusta el capítulo y me hace gracia la pregunta que le hace Kagome haber ha donde le pones las rayas espero que actualices pronto para saberlo
Mary (Chapter 33) - Tue 27 Feb 2024
I read through all the chapters I missed and the addition of the pictures were GENIUS! I'm glad to see both of them starting to embrace their attraction to each other. The fact that they're basically sending thirst traps to each other (well Rin sent Kagome's) is so funny to me. I hope these letters get spicier and spicier until they can see each other again.
Ash (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Feb 2024
Really enjoyed reading this. It's been hard finding good stories the last few years. Please keep updating.
L-desu (Chapter 33) - Wed 21 Feb 2024
More exciting developments, pun intended! The fanart is also exquisite. Looking forward to the next installment!
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