I like this story so far! Is it going to have like a storyline continuing or is just going be a set up and a lemon? Not complaining or anything I just like it want want more. And want to know if this or going to be short.

I keep re-reading. Love it. Hope for another chapter very soon

Whoa! Very steamy! 

I am unsure why people do not enjoy your smut writing. It amazing and  does not have confusing positions to reread.

Your writing it is wonderful and well done when switching pov it seem so nature.

This was amazing going to have add it to my favs.

Thanks for sharing 

That was amazingggggggg. Now let me just go and clean up nosebleed. 

My word

Whoa

Okay you got 50 Shades of Gray beat! This was a very hot chapter that was long awaited. Beautifully written and can't wait to continue the journey. (Corny I know!) Stay safe.

Filthy. So delightfully filthy. 

Well, I'm not complaining about the premise UwU

Perhaps just an observation, while the idea of the two of them surrounded by a bunch of adorable and beautiful hanyo puppies, does not cease to intrigue my mind: the process of giving birth is not exactly a piece of cake ò.óU

Okay now Beast!!! This was sexy and I can't wait to see round two when the other half gets involved!

Oooh. Dirty. I like it. Very sensual, and sometimes down right filthy. But also wonderful delicious. Excited for chapter 4.

Wow.... Nice. 

I'm so jealous! 

*chugs some water* wow that was hot. and theres still more to cum!

I hope Kags takes her rest seriously cause this spell only works for a set amount of time and Beast Sesshou is gonna definitely work her out. I can't wait for your next update, thank you for sharing this with us

Very Very Hot! Excited to read how the other side handles Kagome. They are so sweet and can't wait to see how they react to her preg. 

Great read and stay safe. Wow very detailed I swear!

I NEED more!!! I love the smutty fix's and this is already a top favorite of mine. I hope there's DP down the line. And no, you're not alone in your perviness, lol. If you post more like this on AO3, clearly I need to head there to find the good stuff! I hate navigating it but it's totally worth it for THIS. 

So I just saw your Author's note and I was like thinking are there other stories Chiaztolite has not published to dokuga bc of its explicit nature? And OMG there's the story about the golden dust! Anyways this doppelgänger story has to be one of your best lemons. Excellent writing!

"I will undress myself" ????

You are not alone!!! Lmao please we all need more

HOT DAMN and TWO DOUBLE WOW...WOWs!!! 

Fantastic sexy lemon. :o

Cheers!!!

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