I so loved this story so hot and sweet loved the epilogue with the whole family this was such a wonderful story..... Thank you for writing it.
I love, LOVE your stories, and ugh, this was a scorcher!
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Nov 2022
Please update soon
Very well written, lots of detail, and VERY hot!
Nicely done!
This has to be the mother of all sexy lemons that I have read so far.
You out did yourself on this one. LOL
Very vividly written and sensual...great job.
Cheers :)
I like this story so far! Is it going to have like a storyline continuing or is just going be a set up and a lemon? Not complaining or anything I just like it want want more. And want to know if this or going to be short.
Neko (Chapter 4) - Mon 07 Nov 2022
I keep re-reading. Love it. Hope for another chapter very soon
Whoa! Very steamy!
DJ (Chapter 4) - Sun 06 Nov 2022
I am unsure why people do not enjoy your smut writing. It amazing and does not have confusing positions to reread.
Your writing it is wonderful and well done when switching pov it seem so nature.
This was amazing going to have add it to my favs.
Thanks for sharing
Annie (Chapter 4) - Sat 05 Nov 2022
That was amazingggggggg. Now let me just go and clean up nosebleed.
My word
Kathy (Chapter 4) - Sat 05 Nov 2022
Whoa
Honeyque (Chapter 4) - Fri 04 Nov 2022
Okay you got 50 Shades of Gray beat! This was a very hot chapter that was long awaited. Beautifully written and can't wait to continue the journey. (Corny I know!) Stay safe.
Filthy. So delightfully filthy.
Well, I'm not complaining about the premise UwU
Perhaps just an observation, while the idea of the two of them surrounded by a bunch of adorable and beautiful hanyo puppies, does not cease to intrigue my mind: the process of giving birth is not exactly a piece of cake ò.óU
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