This has to be the most infuriating and idiotic potrayal of Kagome and the most amazingly beastly potrayal of Sesshomaru as a demon male.
The ping pong she has done between the two brothers is grotesque. Any synonym of 'sick' does not do justice to her thought process or actions at this point.
I dont see this version of Kagome redeeming herself as a woman worth her salt in the eyes of Sesshomaru with the way he has accomodated her every 'whim' thus far only to be decieved time and again. I wish you had dwelled a bit on exactly how Sesshomaru became this helpless to his feelings.
Your writing is addictive. The details are elaborate. Everything is explained. The pace is slow here and there with side character interactions. The word choice is impeccable.
Its the 'creature', Kagome, thats an issue. Chapter 86 summed it through Sesshomaru's words perfectly,
"The only thing more perverse than your reasoning is how badly I still want you despite how barking mad you are." Grabbing her around the waist, he pulled her to him. "You’re only sane when I’m inside you.”
Except Sesshomaru is lying to himself if he believes she's ever been sane in this unravelling of the creature named Kagome. Contrary, impulsive, stubborn, rabid, clueless, self-engrossed. An overflowing unkempt dumpster in a filthy alley.
Im frustrated with how 'understanding' everyone is when she is admitting to the truth rather than 'reaming' her a new one.
I love you for your ingenuity and this talent you have with creating this immersive world but im totally hating you for the crawl-burn happening here.
I hope you get inspired to write another slow-burn fic where Kagome and Sesshomaru gravitate towards each other in an immersive manner that does not involve blatant disregard for self-respect of themselves and those around them.
Tamaringa2011 (Chapter 106) - Thu 16 Jan 2025
Nooo Kagome lucha por lo que de verdad quieres ????
Azuraskye21 (Chapter 105) - Mon 13 Jan 2025
Damn...obviously inuyasha still loves kagome but where is sesshomaru? Be cool if he shows up at her moms house
Azuraskye21 (Chapter 104) - Mon 06 Jan 2025
Deep breath, wow....I feel for inuyasha and i first thought he was going to hurt kagome....
Awesome chapters
Azuraskye21 (Chapter 102) - Mon 16 Dec 2024
Great chapter, i wonder if Sesshomaru is in modern tokyo too? Hope to see a update soon.
Azuraskye21 (Chapter 101) - Sun 08 Dec 2024
Truth is out, I started to cry for inuyasha and him gripping his sword to keep him from hurting kagome really tugged at my heart strings. Is kagome really going back to her time or is Sesshomaru going to stop her? Excellent chapter.
Tai (Chapter 101) - Thu 05 Dec 2024
Finally!! But oh poor inuyasha :( thank you for writing as always!! You know the writing is impactful when a story makes you actually feel some sort of way and you are a very impactful storyteller!!
Azuraskye21 (Chapter 100) - Mon 25 Nov 2024
Great chapters, just how much longer will Kagome do this to Inuyasha? Yay for Sesshomaru putting his foot down with her bs but seriously? I feel bad for Inuyasha now.
Tai (Chapter 99) - Fri 15 Nov 2024
Thank you for the updates! Looking forward to seeing how this story goes!
That was so cruel for Inu Yasha to burst Kagome's bubble like that but it would have been done one way or the other. I can't wait until Sango finds out about Kagome's secret.....
Honeyque (Chapter 98) - Thu 07 Nov 2024
I Like the story but starting to get irritated with Kagome. How long is she going to pendulum between the brothers? I was happy for a minute when I thought she was about to let Inuyasha go, but she let Sesshoumaru go and slept with Inu again?
Awesome chapter I forgot about this scene.... spectacular...
Gurssr (Chapter 96) - Fri 25 Oct 2024
Getting sick of this now
Still love this story this was a good chapter....
O..M...G! Is this the big one? Is dense Inuyasha finally going to figure it out? I have totally been enthralled by this story and applaud you all the way!
Tai (Chapter 93) - Thu 25 Jul 2024
Aww I love that they are together!!
Tai (Chapter 92) - Tue 16 Jul 2024
Thank you for the update!
Gadp (Chapter 87) - Wed 27 Mar 2024
Can't wait for the next one! Thanks for writing as always!
Gadp (Chapter 87) - Wed 27 Mar 2024
Can't wait for the next one! Thanks for writing as always!
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