ok this story just got intensely real for me even though many elements are decidedly fantasy.
This chapter in particular spurred my brain into asking myself the following ;
Should one be able to share anything with one's spouse ? YES !
Should one have to share everything with one's spouse ? NO !
Should you share something you know will be to the detriment of your relationship ? Maybe.
high hopes for the upcoming buildup climax and resolution.
I really liked mothers answers to Sesshomaru though. Exactly what he needed to hear given the turmoil.
Amai (Chapter 10) - Tue 15 Aug 2023
One hell of a chapter ! I just loved it. What an unveiling =) bravo bravo
Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Mon 14 Aug 2023
I don't know how Sesshomaru is able to cope. I'd be asking them to clear my 'programming'.
Wonderful sad chapter. Why would she want that jerk when she has Seesh? That explains a lot of her issues. But dang girl! You got the better part of that deal. He will find a way.
Yash1 (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023
WOW! Such a great story!
To start this is a wonderful story and idea and I can't wait for the future chapters. With that said, the more I read it, the more I just want to shake Kagome. Whether she got what she was expecting or not, she made zero prepartions for a husband, so all the heavy lifting to make the marriage work feels like its on Sesshomaru's shoulders. She dismissed and insulted his feelings when he tried to make her feel better, she didn't deal with her feelings on her ex, told no one she ordered a husband, and then has the nerve to be disappointed when Sesshoumaru doesn't speak what's on his mind after dealing with the chaos she put him in due to all of that. I hope someone or something gives her a reality check so she can do some serious introspecting.
So sad but understanding what happened is vital but overcoming the fact will make him stronger for his marriage and be the champion Kagome needs that will strengthen the love they don't know is there.
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