Reviews for Made to Order by Chiaztolite

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Young Kagome (Chapter 11) - Sat 21 Oct 2023

Oh I just want them to talk their problems out!! Great chapter, please update soon!


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 11) - Mon 09 Oct 2023

The realizations all around! Love that Sessh is on a path to discovering himself and that Kagome is actually taking the relationship/marriage seriously and wants it to grow. Also, yuck with the ex. Disgusting vermin.


Kathy (Chapter 11) - Mon 25 Sep 2023

I truly love all your work. You're an excellent author. Yeah portrayal of Sesshomaru and Kagome has me in love. I know I was reluctant to read this story because it didn't seem "organic" but I'm so glad I did read it. I got hooked. And I love how you address issues that others would have. I can't wait to continue reading this story and all your other works. 

I'd buy all your novels!


zodiak023 (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 Sep 2023

I love this unique story plot but I wish u would update faster cause I don't have patience to hang on and wait for these awesome chapters 


Jennifer (Chapter 11) - Thu 21 Sep 2023

This story was so different and intriguing. I loved every second of it! Please update again soon!


Cykotyk (Chapter 11) - Wed 20 Sep 2023

You've captured the turmoil of feeling you're not good enough for the partner you cherish so wonderfully. It sent pangs to my heart as I recalled times I have felt the same. I hope you're doing better in life than Sesshoumaru is doing in these latest chapters


Amai (Chapter 11) - Wed 20 Sep 2023

I appreciate how they both are trying to sort their thoughts out before committing to anything physical. Another way they are compatible. 

Also, you use side characters to bring development for the all characters involved giving the story a realistic touch. 

Please continue writing. 

I LOVE IT !!!


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Wed 20 Sep 2023

Dun Dun Dun!  Just in the nick of time too! Hopefully he will not misconstrue what happened and they will talk it out. I love that Toga is stepping up as a surrogate father. Wonderful chapter. Great story. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Sep 2023

Oh shit what a chapter f'n two timer is after Kagome again and now Sesshomaru see's whats going on hopefully he doesn't get the wrong idea that would be bad but it would be good to put the two timing jerk on the line hearing and seeing what was going on...  Gosh i can't wait to read more.


Dmo (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Sep 2023

Only thing maddening is the cliffhanger!!!  The way your stories have my heart in a vice that is yearning to be let go or squeezed to completion of a story, the updates are maddening as well but so worth it !! I anticipate every update ! ??


MaivenTahl (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Sep 2023

My heart in this one Queen Chiaz. All your stories are so good, I've been so caught up in some of them that I forget about gems like this until you pour yourself into them with all of Sesshoumaru's raw emotions. 

Thank you for the update, I hope your own novels are going well!

 

MaivenXOXOXOX


LadyDaniTar (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Sep 2023

All srgjjff gf u ffuftcyxyfcugvgu

i freakin groaned at this cliffhanger! Ah! 


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 10) - Sat 02 Sep 2023

This is just too beautiful! I love that he's thinking and feeling on his own because that's exactly what will bring them together. Kagome is suspicious and closed off to everything, because she's worried that he doesn't have a real feeling or thought not programmed in her favor, so hopefully the more she sees him as an actual individual the more her true feelings can grow. Excited to see what happens next.


Amai (Chapter 10) - Tue 15 Aug 2023

ok this story just got intensely real for me even though many elements are decidedly fantasy.

This chapter in particular spurred my brain into asking myself the following ;  

Should one be able to share anything with one's spouse ? YES !

Should one have to share everything with one's spouse ? NO !

Should you share something you know will be to the detriment of your relationship ? Maybe.  

high hopes for the upcoming buildup climax and resolution. 

I really liked mothers answers to Sesshomaru though. Exactly what he needed to hear given the turmoil. 

 


Amai (Chapter 10) - Tue 15 Aug 2023

One hell of a chapter ! I just loved it. What an unveiling =) bravo bravo 


Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Mon 14 Aug 2023

I don't know how Sesshomaru is able to cope.  I'd be asking them to clear my 'programming'.


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

Wonderful sad chapter. Why would she want that jerk when she has Seesh? That explains a lot of her issues. But dang girl! You got the better part of that deal. He will find a way. 


Yash1 (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

WOW! Such a great story!


cherry20052 (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

To start this is a wonderful story and idea and I can't wait for the future chapters. With that said, the more I read it, the more I just want to shake Kagome. Whether she got what she was expecting or not, she made zero prepartions for a husband, so all the heavy lifting to make the marriage work feels like its on Sesshomaru's shoulders. She dismissed and insulted his feelings when he tried to make her feel better, she didn't deal with her feelings on her ex, told no one she ordered a husband, and then has the nerve to be disappointed when Sesshoumaru doesn't speak what's on his mind after dealing with the chaos she put him in due to all of that. I hope someone or something gives her a reality check so she can do some serious introspecting. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

So sad but understanding what happened is vital but overcoming the fact will make him stronger for his marriage and be the champion Kagome needs that will strengthen the love they don't know is there.


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