Ah, I'm worries for Mizuki because of the jewel! I hope Kagome and Sesshomaru can go back into the past to protect her!
So this is a unique story, and I do like some parts of it such as Rin being reincarnated as Kagome's child. The first chapter was a little confusing to read because I couldn't who was speaking the dialogue, and it took me a little bit to figure that out since you jumped around, but never really explained who was speaking to whom. I also am wondering why you choose to avoid the word "said" in your writing?
Now off to read the rest.
| Nice chapter.
Wow its been a while since you posted an update glad you did meanial tasks and dressing down can always be fun... lol loved it. Can't wait till they start training.
| Great story.
That was a nice chapter well done update soon.
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