Heh that was intense. I’m looking foward to more!!;)
Hello,
I feel really bad because I left only one review for this story. It's just that I'm following this fic on your blog where you post the chapters much sooner. And it's kind of hard for me to leave a review here when on your blog you are already a few chapters farther.
But I will try in the future to remember what I thought and felt while reading a chapter and leave a review here. Sorry again!
Just know that there is someone out there *waves hand* who is reading your fic and enjoying is immensely!!! I check your blog daily for an update! ;)
Keep the good work up!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Lorena (Chapter 7) - Sat 29 Sep 2018
I never could've imagined this chapter...for some reason I pictured something game-like maybe Kagome found Sesshomaru post-rutt, but this was so cool. I love how much his energy affected Kagome and I beg of you to make an upcoming chapter in his perspective because I need to know what was going through his mind before and during this chapter please
Nora (Chapter 1) - Mon 24 Sep 2018
this is such a good story. I'm captivated! Can't wait for an update
good a story....i think sesshoumaru is the demon?but maybe not....just try to guess it.
I have a bad feeling about this..
VS (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Sep 2018
Hello,
this fic is just AWESOME!!! I'm definitely going to follow this story! It's refreshing to read a story where Sesshoumaru and Kagome don't fall in love withing the first chapter! So thank you very much!!!
When and why did Sesshoumaru develop his problem? How did Kagome find out and what was her reaction? Who is this youkai who is killing the girls? What is Kagome's theory? And why were Sango and Kohaku reacting so strange after Kagome explained her thoughts?
Gosh there is so much I want to know. You got me all excited here!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Hopefully, you are still hoping to update and complete soon... looks like Sesshamaru is obsessed with Kagome, and rapes and kills others who look like her, since he can't have her. Can't wait to read more!
This is getting even more interesting. I’m looking forward to reading more.
This is a very fascinating story and it is very well written also.
I get the impression that Kagome's investigation of the murdered girls are going to lead her back to someone she knows that is the killer.
I think that monster is Sesshomaru's beast as the one that is killing those girls so viciously, but it seems that Sesshomaru is aware of his beast's motives for doing what it is doing. I think his beast has gone off the deep end for some reason and Sesshomaru cannot control it.
This is a very dark and sad tale. At first I thought maybe he was obsessing over Kagome and maybe even in love with Kagome but I think not now. It seems to be something else entirely. Did Sesshomaru kill Inuyasha?
Looking forward to further updates or not...I'm not sure because I'm not to crazy about this type of portrayal of my favorite pairing. But you have drawn me into this story now.
Wonderful writing!!!
The anticipation!
Inuyaoi (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Sep 2018
Ugh the dead body grossed me out. So really, great writing. Im left with questions and look forward to the next chapter.
Mulata (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 Sep 2018
OH MY GOD YOUR STORY IS SO GOOD. Really, your grammar is very good and the text nicely structured. And the plot, oh the plot is amazing. Please keep posting it! Good writers are rare nowadays.
This storyline is so fascinating. Looking forward to reading more!
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Sep 2018
To tell you the truth I don't want to read this fic. By the summary and seeing the genre is dark angst and no romance ... I can see a twin piece of stasis. Just because it's written by you and because I admire your talent I have given it a try. And was caught in the Web of your woven words. I do want to read it but I know no happy ending is possible and I personally don't like when Sesshomaru is portrayed as obsessive and crazy without reason. I mean many authors don't look deeper on his character and yay let's make him a psycho rapist. I am not saying it as something bad. Every author has his own vision.. The thing is I think I am not strong enough to stomach such a dark fiction at the moment. So I apologise in advance. I love your writing and you Really are talented but I would like to ask you to post some other of your work as well. Even if dark but with a good ending, no not unicorns and butterflies, but normal I would be very grateful and happy. I don't always remember to visit your blog but Dokuga has that subscription thing which I love!.
That being said I wish you good luck with your fic. Take care of yourself and Thx again for writing!
now this chapter, full of drama and mystery sets the tone. the first was a shock and a wow
Excited to see where this is going on how they get there! Can’t wait for more!
Sesshomaru is the killer, isn't he?
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