Hello,
this chapter was amazing!!! I loved the idea with Ah-Un :D And like Kagome I was getting really frustrated with "perfect" Sesshoumaru ... but then came the Magic 8 Ball ... and Sesshoumaru failed!!! Hurray!!! I was laughing like mad when he melted that thing!!! Great idea! :)
And it is so sweet of him to redraw her tattoo. He was showing the whole Shiro that he belongs to someone! Stupid Jaken! They will love Kagome, Sesshoumaru will make sure of that!
I'm looking forward to the confrontation of Kagome and Sesshoumaru! He will be mad that she continued the ritual aftet he told her that it is not necessary and even got hurt by it. And he will be mad like hell, because she fleet like that!
Great work!
Wayne (Chapter 3) - Fri 07 Sep 2018
Im addicted, i need more lots more
Maya (Chapter 3) - Thu 06 Sep 2018
I'm so excited for the next chapter! Your writing is very cohesive and the story is well put together.
I love your story, it has a similar tone to the manga. I like the character interactions.
This story is a great read. Thank you!
Oh I loved this chapter. Taming Ah-Un! She’s lucky he didn’t crush her entire leg when he rolled on her. Sessh is going to be worried. He’ll most likely take it out on Jaken, and rightly so. Thank you for updating this charming story.
I don't think Sesshomaru will be very please if she broke her ankle and is out of commission for 6 weeks lol. I wonder what he'll do when she comes back?
so glad to see an update! i really do wonder why sesshomaru hasnt taken her to the stronghold yet! i feel kagome's pain when it comes to having insecurities in a relationship like that! i hope they can get on the same page soon and start communicating better!
Oh Kagome...what have you gotten yourself into? Lol
Miss C (Chapter 1) - Fri 31 Aug 2018
Please continue this story!
Ren (Chapter 3) - Thu 30 Aug 2018
I love how adorable this story is! Just gives off all around good vibes. Loved the puzzles Kagome brought and cant wait to see what he thinks about her ditching him like she did. Great chapter!
Whoops, probably a sprain? Cool chapter!
Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 3) - Thu 30 Aug 2018
Been sooooo long XD! I await the update impatiently XD.Sessho gon be pissed but good move on her part. You get a common cold in that era and you could die from infection lol. smart move. point for the future.
Update soon!!!
this was just too cute. cant wait to see Shippo's transformation!
Little Witch (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Jul 2018
Okay, so I know this fic is complete, but...my god, I could read 1000 more chapters of it. You have a beautiful writing style, and I love how you've constructed these characters and their relationships, and just...everything. It's so good. So yeah, I hope you choose to continue it some day, or continue writing in this universe, because it's just TOO GOOD to be only a two-shot. :)
Rin (Chapter 2) - Sun 15 Jul 2018
Ahhhh. Thank you for writing and sharing this! ♥ So good. Much love sent your way for this.
Rin (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Jul 2018
Oh yes. Very good. I am here at the edge of my seat reading this continually going "yes, good, more of this thank you"
Thank you very much for writing this. It has fullfilled a need in me for seeing this kind of subtle but sure courting. ♥
This was a wonderful little story. Others have complimented on your depiction of Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but I'd also like to compliment you on Shippou as well. Even though he's little, he's still fairly capable of astute observations beyond Kagome sometimes.
I did notice a couple of oddities. Most notably, Grandpa had a 'sweeping brush'. It'd be better to change that to 'broom', because the term caused me to pause in my reading in brief perplexity.
Very pleasantly surprised to see an update for this :). Loved the first instalment and this one was so cute! My favourite bit was Sesshomaru just casually waltzing in and painting her face. I could imagine he was doing it so gently, too <3. Keep up the good work!
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