W....w....what just happened? Where did Kagome go? Aside from the gazillion questions I have, I was extremely impressed with your imagery at the waterfall. I thought for sure that something "more" would happen, but I guess it wasn't time yet. Brownie points for keeping everyone in character.

Powerful ending! Rushing off to read the newest update now!

Finally! He's taking her with him! Alright! Could this be the start of their bond??

Uh ohhhh. What just happened. Oh nuuu where's Kagomeee?? Thanks for the update and I hope you feel better!!!

I regret not reading this sooner. I was going to based on the summary but it took me a while to decide whether it was worth making an account or not. I've always been a strict Rin/Sess fan and never thought I'd join a community that support a different pairing for him. I love how this story is written is so far, and there's a lot of potential for "in character" romance for these two. [[rubbing hands together]]

Fascinating beginning!

This story is so well written, it has such depth and character.  I look forward to the next update! 

I'm so sorry to hear that you're sick, and I'm so glad that you decided to update anyway. I'm here to say that you did an incredible job again. Great work. I hope all of these plot questions can be answered soon. He's been missing for so long...what happened to him? Who was that Kagome at the waterfall and was she the real Kagome? Then again, I think we saw the real Kagome in the older child that finally freed him from the dream.

Ugh, I'm rolling around on the floor just squealing because I need to know what's going on! I hope the next update won't be long in coming to us. I'll also bet that I'm not the only person with these thoughts. You're a wonderful writers, and someday you'll have a huge fanbase. So keep chugging!

Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! The scene at the waterfall was amazing, and now I have so many questions that I couldn't list them all. Wonderful Sesshoumaru portrayal in this chapter as always and an ending with a shocking conclusion. Wonderful!

Wow, so it was he who brought her back. And oh boy he is in such denial. Can't wait to find out what happened to Kagome. Hopefully they'll meet again soon. I also hope she retains the essence of who she was, what makes her Kagome. To me that's very important; otherwise, she may as well be another person, which I'll get fighty with you about.  BTW, grammatically it's, "for all intents and purposes" not "intensive purposes."

Thanks for writing - can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow three months and where is the child? So many questions. Great story. Thanks for the update. Feel better.

This chapter was great but a lil weird.  Looking forward to reading more to come though.

Oh no! Where did she go? What's this about sacrifice?? And the end was a huge shock! Three months???? What the heck happened?

Whoa. Seriously. This imagery is friggin intense. I love this so much.

I might just have to theorycraft this plot...it seems pretty complex!

This girl intrigues me. Is she Kagome? Has that been asked like a 100 times? I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.

Wow! I have to say you are very good!There are some awesome authors here and I've read alot of excellent stories on this site. One of my fave places to come lose myself when i have the time. You just shot straight to the top! Damn!! What I wouldn't give to have your talent! 

So descriptive! LOVE IT!

Your prose and nerrative are extremely good.

"Kagome…" The name was ripped from a place deep inside him, the syllables existing as both a breath of relief and a gasp of wonder.

I can't get enough of your writing. It's so beautiful and unique. And now you've left all of us on a suspenseful note and I'm sure everyone is dying to know what the next step is. Please update soon!