| No, seriously... you have to continue this.
I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Mon 30 Apr 2007
| Continue soon please you can't just leave off like that so please continue
| You really should make this into a story. Cause its really good and should be continued.
I Love Sesshomaru Aka FLUFFY - Sama- Tue 17 Apr 2007
| Please continue soon :)
SemiPrecious- Sat 14 Apr 2007
| oh, don't you DARE leave this a one-shot. it's too sad. very good, but sad. i hope that you continue to write!!
rowdygirl- Fri 13 Apr 2007
| oh, you have to continue this, you have to bring them back together. you have to do this so i can stop crying. this is really good!
I Love Sesshomaru Aka FLUFFY - Sama- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| Please make it into a story with a really good ending! I Beg of you please keep writeing PLEASE. And Can you make the ending a little happy or something I read a really good story the other day that ended with Kagome Dying and not seeing her freind and family to tell them once more that she loved them but she couldn't she just had to leave. When I Read it I started to cry and my mom was laughing at me then I told her to read it and she started to cry to and I have never once seen her cry before
Angels- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| Update! ME LOVE STORY
lady fairy goth- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| nooooooooooooo! you cant leave it there you have to continue please you left us i suspense. what about the baby huh!
Pats- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| Oh no, na ah, you can't leaved it there, sequel or continue, either way, what suits you best is good enough for me, and i won't take a refusal
Awwww...
I love the way you protray emotions in this FF! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!! tHIS WOULD MAKE A WONFERFUL STORY!!!!!
helikesitheymikey!- Wed 11 Apr 2007
I vote for you continuing.....I mean Sess isn't just punishing himself...he's punishing Kags and unknowingly their pup.....
maybe he'll see her and his pup(s) in a few years and feel like an even bigger do-do-head!!!!!!!!!
*starts begging* PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY NNNNEEEEEEEEDDD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kat- Wed 11 Apr 2007
| no now you have to fix this there is no leaving this alone... there is much groveling in sessho's future!!! update soon
Noacat- Wed 11 Apr 2007
| Omigod. You better continue this. I'm not afraid to give you a vicious noogie if you don't.
renee- Wed 11 Apr 2007
| I think this is the perfect beginning to a story. You should continue.
That was unbelievably great. That was really really good. You did a great job. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
-River
Deb L- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Good one-shot, but it definately has the ability to be made into a full-fledged story. I've only got one question, though. You statedthat Sess was treating Kag just like his father treated his mother, but was that the only motivating factor for the change in behavior -- the title demanded it be so? Make it into a full fic, please. Do you take bribes?
al- Wed 11 Apr 2007
it's good,and if you can make a sequel,draw it out...with some chapters.he has to earn forgiveness.some flashbacks would be good to,both good and bad.
in the meantime,take care of yourself and good luck.
it was a really good short story.
| It was a good one-shot. In the future, you may want to space out your paragraphs a little more. Makes them easier to read. But I did like the way you took the songs, and incorporated them into the story so seamlessly. Hope to see more from you :)
Megan- Wed 11 Apr 2007
| I have always thought that 'stupid boy' would be the perfect song for a sess/kag fic after he did something stupid. it's just something that he would do. awesome!
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