This was a lovely and very sad story. I felt like I was going to cry (kinda of sappy of me, huh?) Great job. :)

OMG, U have me crying...and a sad song was playing while I was reading this and I am crying even more!!

It's SO SO *sniff* SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!*blows nose on hanky*

PLEASE DON'T EVER MAKE ANOTHER SESS/KAG WITH ONE OF THEM DYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Those alway make me sad and I cry....
this was a very sad story, but it was well written...but sad.
POOR RIN!!!!!!!!!! POOR SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so she was visiting her grave??

I HAVE AN IDEA THAT WOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY AND MAKE IT HAVE A HAPPY SESS/KAG ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you could do a cross-over with the series "Dead Like Me"!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this girl got killed but in the end she is made into a reaper so she collects the dead souls and helps them pass into the next world....but she's still kinda alive and she even works where she used to work, but the different people/friends/family that she had before she "died" don't recognize her....
and she can't really visit them{her family} because the little gremlin things that kill the people that the reapers collect might do something bad to her family

Here http : / / www . tv . com / dead - like -me / show / 16840 / summary . html ? q = dead % 20 like % 20 me & tag = search _ results ; title ; 0

Would you please at least look at the link and consider the idea?....I'm sure you could make it wonderful!!!!!!!
Kagome could even adopt Shippo!!!!!!!