Jaken is great comic relief, hehe! I'm looking forward to the reunion between Kagome and Shippou. I love how Sess compliments Kagome in his mind and remembers that she has a mouth on her. It's great to see that Kagome has matured as to control how she speaks. I'm certain though she is a spitfire if the need calls for it though:) Great story!
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.
Pamela (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015
I lobe Jaken that was hilarious I will exorcise her for you my Lord, haha. I like that Kagome is too be a secret weapon:)
There are at least two or maybe three stories out there that use the demon realm angle in their stories. This I believe is the fourth one that I have read and I like it very much. I wish the chapters were a bit longer but I will take what I can get. I like your plot and this is very well written. I look forward to the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru in future chapters. I am a little familiar with Schrodinger's Cat. It's a very complex and fascinating theory. Keep up the good writing. Update again soon if you have the time.
Funny poor jac.
Saiya (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Wow and Jaken is still alive.
Really looking forward to this its good.
Saiya (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
Hehehehehehe
rose (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
next chapter please
rose (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
next chapter please
Pamela (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
Seems Sesshoumaru is entranced with Kagome's scent, hehe. Wonder what Kagome's feeling were while being necked by a fabulously sexy youkai:) thanks for updating so quickly wonder what caused her lack of aging. Wonder if Jaken will make an appearance and if he will still dislike Kagome or if he has thawed some. Great chapter! Thanks for updating.
Pamela (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
This story is so original. I love that Kagome is in the military and that she is now working with Sess. Awww! Inuyasha dying is sad, but I'm glad Shippou is still alive. Nice moment between Sess and Kags in the car. The tension is certainly up there and I'm sure the temp in the car has raised exponentially:) Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Saiya (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
Hehehehe So Cute!
Great story, keep it coming.
Aw. Poor inu. Well a least she will get to ship and maybe the wolf. Looking forward to next chapter.
Fun story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015
Hehehehehehe of Course theres so Leak
Am loving the separate demon land angle new idea looking forward to see where you go with this.
Mona (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Oct 2015
Suspenseful!!! Is Inuyasha dead or not? Sesshoumaru didn't give a response to her query of Inuyasha.
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