Ohhh interesting... I like it. Can't wait to read more :)

Oh my gosh! Interesting start! I would liketo know how the death of her soul would take place but then it would be spoiled so I'll just wait for the updates. I hope it won't be too long.

Wow, you've already pulled me in. I'm excited to see where this goes!

what an exiting start!! I already look forward to the next chapter but I'm already dreading what that last line mean s