This chapter was absolutely delightful! I liked the imagery of a worried Rin curled up on Sess, and him reassuring her. A small cookie bribe seals the deal!
I love Kagome's Percocet/vodka induced behavior! You can feel his burn at her pushing all the buttons on the elevator.
(The description of her looking like an escaped mental patient had me rolling, btw!)
She just cracked me up as she discusses with the doctor her physical ailments and self-medication practices... LMAO!!! I like that he just takes it all in stride, and sees the interesting person beneath the illness... he wants to ask her out!
"Snorlaxagome..." very nice, and soooo attractive! This part was particularly sweet. I can see him sitting there, entertaining Rin with books, while they both keep an eye on Kagome.
At the end, it is so poignant they both know Rin is desperately is trying to pull the threads they are weaving into each other's lives into a family she can wrap herself up in. This is so very much something a child would try to will into being. You portrayed it very, very well... I can't wait to see what comes next.
| (gah, i've been so busy lately, i haven't been here in so long....)
please update again soon!!
| I loved reading the last three chapters. I'll be glad when these two finally admit their affections for one another.
Wonderful stories. I was just wondering if they get together and marry, would they just stay Rin's Aunt and Uncle or would they adopt her as their child? Just curious.
Great writing as ususal... *hugs and smiles*
I like the last sentence! ^___^ Well I hope that you update soon!
| OH MY GOD..i loved sailor moon when i was little..i miss that show so much, cartoonnetwork sucks for taking it off the air......but anyway poor rin was sick and now kags is too...i know she hated it to she sesshomaru standing there and she looked like crap...but anyway please update sooner than you did this chapter i was starting to worry here and thats not nice not at all
Lilium (Chapter 20) - Sat 14 Feb 2009
Thank you for updating!!!! I've been waiting a long time for the next chapter!!! Please another update soon? = )
Possessed (Chapter 20) - Sat 14 Feb 2009
You captured the anxiety of an inexperienced caretaker confronted with a sick child very well! When everything is going fine, you think you have it all under control. It is when they look and feel so bad, while you are there helpless, doing the little things you can do, that you realize the control is just an illusion.
As usual, the dialogue is perfect and you keep all the players in character, while allowing them to grow into each other at a natural pace. You are able to keep the story interesting even when describing the day-to-day happenings and things move along in a nice flow.
I like the ending! She has no health insurance, she is in need of a Dr., and she is naked under the covers in front of an extremely sexy man she likes... not looking or feeling her best. It is just plain cruel for you to do THAT to her, LOL!
Hah! I knew she'd be sick. With the way strep and the flu travel around our office between mothers with children and vice versa, there's little chance you also WON'T get sick by proxy.
I'm glad she apologized and they went back to their normal pandering back and forth. I feel as if their excessive working is building up to something. Hrm.. Great chapter! I miss your writing.
Please, more. I love this so much.
I'm so excited for the update! I'm posting this before I even read the chapter because I'm SOOO excited! Yay!
Ladydot (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
This story is brilliant! I love it so much. I really can't wait to see how Sesh takes care of poor Kagome! Its going to be so funny and adorable i just know it! Till next time
Ladydot (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
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Lumiere (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
very funny that she could actualy tink of "that" when so sick......so i was actualy thinking if and when he finds that she is his favorite author....???
i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
| Weeeee! You are back! *happy dance* thanks for another great chapter:)
slycats (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
| really great new chapter! So happy and grateful for the update. Well, now Sesshomaru can play doctor...hee,hee. The part of the story that has Sesshomatu comparing Rin's personality to Inuyashas and getting a better feel for the 2 of them as brothers was so sweet. Can't wait to see more of Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship together.
Anggie (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
| With each new chapter I am just amazed. I can't find a hole in your characters. They are so well rounded its chapter 20 and I'm still amazed. I can't wait for more updates.
Nobody (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
YAY! Now i want more but i will wait....as long as i have too.
*Sits and waits
Sumi (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
a good way to start the weekend....you updated!!! this is a NICE breather from studying. now i'll be trying to patiently wait for the next one. gonna try....grr.. CANT WAIT!! lol
tessahime (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Feb 2009
| Finally! I am so indescribably happy you updated ^-^! I was hit by a car about a month ago, and was somewhat bedridden for about two weeks (while on some very good drugs I might add) and your story was my poison of choice to go back and reread. Now that I'm at school, I anxiously await a new update from you basically every night. This story it completely addictive, and I blame you for the drop in my grades ;)
Ashes (Chapter 20) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
You updated!!!! I'm so happy! Absolutely amazing chapter, you captured what it feels like to be thrust into the role of 'mother' extreemly well. Beautiful work as allways. Also, I really like the little situation you threw in at the end. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update. (^_^)
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