| I like the premise of your story, I really do, especially the part about Kagome being a Fox Demon as well. It puts to mind any/all possibilities on what she can do.  I do hope you continue with your storytelling as I've enjoyed what you've written thus far. Thanks for sharing!    
 | However,i still like the 3rd pov. But,nice try.    
       
 
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