Wow Poor Kagome i hope you get better.
Not bad but Inuyasha was still lying. He planned on lying and keeping Kagome too. If anything Kikyo being with him proves Kikyo is obviously even worse than originally thought. She willing kept seeing him knowing what he was doing. I seriously hope that Kagome keeps her distanc from both. he could never be her best friend. Though I hope Miroku is right and that you have Inuyasha seriously regret his involvement with Kikyo. Not just because he hurt Kagome, but because he realized that Kikyo and him was never the right choice, and that he lost the one person who actually did really love him. Not someone who only cared for him conditionall. Hopefully Karma deals Inuyasha the blow he needs.
I like this storyline so far. First person narrative can be tricky as we can only know as much about the world and people in it as Kagome observes. It good to be privy to her thoughts as dark as they are.
Great chap.
next chapter please
What a b****h inu is.
That was a sad couple of chapters but very good.
Great!
Holing you are able to update again soon.
Wow inuyasha really did it this time! Poor kagome her heart was shattered along with her warmth and emotions. :( But It was a great story! Job well done!!
That was simply awesome! I can't wait for further chapters!! -is a fan of your work-
Great! I very much enjoyed this fanfic so far, I wonder who will be more cold and stoic now, Sesshoumaru or Kagome? Also, your writing style is good to me if there were any mistakes I did not read any. Thanks for sharing.
this has me begging for more.
Awesome Aweesome Awesome! Im digging this so far. So dramatic and well written. I really cant wait for the next installment
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wow that was sad. Poor Kagome (hehehe a say Poor Kagome alot) This chapter was neat Inu needs too realize he can't have both.
The first chapter is very promising. I am curious how it will go further.
Yeah I really like this story so far. Keep up the good work.
Damn like Wow Kikyo's heart grew a little.
Wow, this is new! It's Inuyasha wanting to do that and Kikyo feeling guilty, not the other way around? Interesting... I'll be waiting for more.
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