This has me captivated. I love it Definitely a fan and I shall follow. 

Interesting work like OK so far see how you progress.. Lots of great possibilities 

So intense and sweet. I knew that he wouldn't kill her. Sesshomaru doesn't like to be told or ordered to do anything. I would like it very much if the chapters were longer. Update soon!!!

As you have done for me, it is now me leaving responses in return! How accurately metaphoric and poetic! The way you have portrayed Sesshomaru's first person narrative is quite intriguing; while very formal, I can't help but imagine his musing as such! A very unique twist on the hybridization of Kagome as both yokai and miko as well. I can't wait to see how you further their interactions :)

-FDS

I love the way the story flows and the use of words to phrase the emotions of the two. I would love to read more. Update soon!

Well I didn't think he would feel the need to kill her but apparently I was wrong.  But he seems to be having trouble with his own decision  there.....  well then? I do have a question will this be a dark fix or a engagwing story with plenty twist and turns

Wow.

A continuation  would be much appreciated  

It is wrong to make this a one shot ....it calls for more.

Okay okay it's an excellent one shot but it is also a good beginning :)

Whoa-whoa-whoa.... That's a lot of fancy words, neh? Took me a moment to puzzle it all through... I must say, you are exceptionally skilled at one-shots! I can see this growing into an excellent chapter story. Brilliant work, and haunting, too. The part about Kagome's blood vessuls rupturing just got to me. Well done, my friend.