| I REALLY liked this! A lot! Awesome job!
Wawa (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Sep 2008
| I enjoyed reading this story. I would like to read more.
| Please, please, PLEASE continue!!!
::puppy dog eyes and trembling lips::
Pretty please? I love it and it sounds likea great beginning to a great story.
| Ahhhh. That was whitty, neat, nice and very enjoyable. I giggled madly at my unresponsive computer screen. Hmmmm... A continuation of this chapter would induce more of that ridiculous display, but I'm willing to risk it. ^_^ Dewa mata
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Sep 2008
| me too hikari hime me too! Perfect challenge fic! DAMN PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION. Great job it was witty and funny with a small hint of everything else i adored it!! You get a five!!!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Sep 2008
| This was quite enjoyable, and it does lend itself to continuation... Well? We're waiting...
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Sep 2008
| Great job FD, and gotta say I agree with the others. This would make a great start for a longer story. Perhaps you should think about continuing it, I'm sure you would have many happy fans jumping to read additional chapters :)
| this demands more! lovely oneshot otherwise. seriously MORE!
| Nice full of snippy comebacks and whit!! Awesome!!
| that would be an EXCELLENT start to a new fic, huh huh? **jab jab, nudge nudge**.......((DO U REALLY WANT ME TO BEG U TO CONTINUE?!?))
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