awesome updates thank you so much.
Oh how i'm loving the frequent updates. I can see how much fun you're having with this story. It's definitely all yours now :) Great work. As badly timed these updates are since i'm swamped in school work and work work, i still sneak away to read them, lol. Can't help it. It's very realistic, with naraku's struggles with fatherhood here and there. I do look forward to reading more from this story. Keep up the great work
tonya (Chapter 5) - Sat 01 Nov 2014
love the updates!
great chapter thank you.
so so cute thank you.
I thought he was having a hard time with kagome picking things out. I wonder how he's going to react to souta wanting a kitty.
rose (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Nov 2014
next chapter please
Selina (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Nov 2014
Good work! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for updating.
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 3) - Sat 01 Nov 2014
great story!
that was great thank you.
katie (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Oct 2014
Ahhh that last sentes is funny as hell. Please keep going it is getting good
rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Oct 2014
next chapter please
I like it. It's cute and funny.
Marie (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014
So far so good. I think I would to follow your story and see how it develops. So far you have me interested. Keep up the good work
I read the story that you gained inspiration from about a year ago. I thoroughly enjoyed it and i could see the resemblance after the first paragraph. That story first opened my mind to the idea of Naraku as the protective older brother/father figure instead of the enemy. Anyways, back to your story, i would love to read another story around the same theme and i'm already seeing how you're making it your own. I'll definitely be looking out for future updates ^_^ Keep up the great work.
rose (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014
next chapter please
so far really like it thanks.
katie (Chapter 2) - Wed 29 Oct 2014
Wow now its getting very good please keep going u got me hooked
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