interesting premise.

it is attention catching. 

if you still did not find someone to bounce ideas, i can help if you want. it is a good idea and i am curious as to what will happen next.

Nice chapter. Please update soon.

Ha!   Glad someone has some sense.  Really looking upon a helpless female naked.  Honor seems to be just a four letter word.  Like the begining u have my attention.  Is a trained kagome miko?  Please?!

This seems to be an interesting start to what could be a good story. Nicely written (speech, grammar and spelling were good). Hope you will continue this story and if you do, update soon if RL allows you.

Ooooooh this is interesting! Please continue!