Great chapter, can't wait for more.
i hope they get to Kagome on time. Update soon
Cheryl (Chapter 9) - Tue 11 Aug 2015
thanks for the new chapter~~! the short on rin was so heartbroken, good write though. can't wait for a new chapter~! :)
Haven (Chapter 9) - Tue 11 Aug 2015
I feel so bad for Rin in this fanfiction....
Haven (Chapter 8) - Sat 08 Aug 2015
I hope you finish this!
HELLO!
Big fan of this little chapter story and I'm so glad you updated. I'm a new user here but I've written fanfics on other websites and I'm a very good beta. I'm interested to see how you will continue this story. Keep writing!
Ankita (Chapter 8) - Tue 17 Feb 2015
Waahh after such a long time
Yah!you are not dead iam so glad I love your story can't wait for the next chappie so Zura away
Nice, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day
Shaneka (Chapter 7) - Sat 26 Jul 2014
Great chapter update. Waiting with excitment for the next chapter.
If you missed Sailor Moon Crystal episode 2 you can watch it on youtube. Great chapter, keep it coming.
Yay! He finally acts on his thoughts! I wonder what Naraku has in store and how Kagome's life will change now that she knows of the existence of demons. I look forward to reading more.
While your first chapter is good, I find the over use of colloquials makes the dialogue forced and the flow somewhat off. I love the idea for this story. It is unique and I love that. But the dialogue makes it hard for me to read.
*Tiana
I am loving this fic I can't wait for more!
Shaneka (Chapter 6) - Wed 16 Jul 2014
Great chapter, update soon.
rose (Chapter 6) - Mon 14 Jul 2014
next chapter please
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