Holy crude balls. I'm tearing up here. This was a beautifully written peice. One of my top 10 favorites since reading Sesshomaru/Kagome fan fiction ( and ive been reading for 10 years at least). Bravo! Everything was so romantically tragic. It had just perfect amounts of knowledge, background, feelings, and dialog. Im so in love with this, so sucked into this universe that I really cried at the end. Great job! Amazing flow of art. An astounding, heart stealing example of a lyrical short tale. And to think I would have never even known this existed if I hadn't looked at the "Dr. Sesshomaru challenge".
That was exceptionally well written. Very sad but also beautiful.
This was wonderful!
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Nicole (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 May 2014
That was beautifully written. It brought tears to my eyes at the end, but the rest, though sad, was also filled with hope and love.
C-crying? Who's crying? No one here, I say!
In all seriousness, though, thanks for an amazing story.
Caera (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 May 2014
Oh my heaven your story is one helluva tear jerker.I love this story and it made me cry at the end.
Thank you for writing this wonderful piece,may you have more beautiful stories in the future. :)
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