I really loved this story
Awwwww
This was great and I really enjoyed reading it.
Ah another good fic! I enjoyed it a lot!! I thank you very much for writing such good fics! A very good read sweet and tender!
hmn very cute and i kinda laughed a chunk of the way thru it but it was a good story.
SCREAM THAT IS SO NOT FAIR!!!! LOL Love your story!
That was a completely delightful read! Thanks so much for reposting it :)
LOL!!
You greedy old man!
xD
What a great story! Gave me warm fuzzy feelings from the beginning to the end.Good job!
This story was amazing, awesome and I enjoyed it!
Going great sofar, just some minor grammar issues, mainly with then vs than from what i have notised atleast.
Then refers to chronological/time "first this, then that".
Than is comparative "This is biger than that" (or like the end of ch32 when Sesshy tells gramps he will have to do better it should be "You will have to do better than that priest." also im not sure but i think there should be a comma before "priest")
You know your evil right? How could you just leave us hanging?????!!!!!!!! lol cant wait to see the next chapter! this storys great
I am really enjoying your story. I like Sesshoumaru's openness and acceptance of his feelings. He is very sweet in this story.
Nice chapters, keep it coming.
Great story, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
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