Another chapter well done Imani Joain,
So to be clear if you ever the time and chance to replay back to this comment of mine your oc Ryukostokken is Ry?kotsusei’s son?
I might have missed a description of the OC but will he be described in detail again or do I have to go back a few chapters to re-read that part? Also what does your OC’s name mean in Japanese translation? so far I only for a few word correct on titles you mentioned on your story so far.
Hope to hear back from you soon.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
smcandy (Chapter 11) - Tue 31 Dec 2013
I have to admit you make this story very comical.
You so far have kept everyone from the cannon as best IC as you could. But I must admit I had a few laughs in hugging my sides when I see how well you portray InuYasha getting flared up at certain topics and scenario’s that would make do a 180 for. Again good work this looking promising I cannot wait to read more my friend.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
smcandy (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 Dec 2013
Not many S/A sties make good detail when it comes to explain to a yokai of the past how thing work in Kagome time. So far the details you have shown in this chapter on that was spot on. Not many stories I red on the Iy fandom have good explanations as to why people cannot see yokai in the present tome of Kagome’s Era but so far yo creates something worthwhile I cannot wait to read more ^^
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
Liking all, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Hmm, I wonder who this informant could be...
Great chapter - very much enjoyed the insight into Kagome's growing feelings toward Sess. Looking forward to the next update!! Oh, and Happy Holidays! :)
Ashes (Chapter 17) - Sat 21 Dec 2013
Very interesting.
update soon! your story still amazed me
Ana (Chapter 17) - Thu 19 Dec 2013
ohhhhh the bed scean was so sweet! :3 Really really sweet!
Thank you for the update :D
I've just begun reading, and I'm enchanted. Thank you so much for telling this story!
please, i want to read more. . :(
Oh man, am I lookin' forward to the confrontation between Sess & Kouga! :D I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed reading your story so far - the faithful characterizations, the well-developed plot, the yummy interactions between Sess & Kags...It just keeps getting better and better! Love your original characters too, especially Kento (and Ryukostokken - he's one hell of a nasty villain :D), and I wonder how the new addition(s) to the pack will fit in and affect Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship. Anyway, great job, Imani - keep up the awesome work! :)
Uh-oh~! Oh my i can't wait for the next update! This will be very interesting~! :-)
momo1o1 (Chapter 16) - Wed 11 Dec 2013
an update! yay :) oh boy! here comes kouga...dont kill him sesshoumaru. lol
Suka25 (Chapter 15) - Sun 08 Dec 2013
Oh my.... i had tears in my eyes! Love it! MORE!
Ana (Chapter 15) - Wed 04 Dec 2013
So sad :(
Very well wrighten! Thank you for updating! :D
The spacing and paragraphs on this chapter are all weird. O.o
OMG....Your story never fails to amaze me. I can barely contain my self from checking every day at every hour for an update so please PLEASE don't take too long to update next time ok....have mercy on this one's poor soul!!!.
Ceelie (Chapter 15) - Tue 03 Dec 2013
Hey there, your chapter is a bit... off? Your normal structure isn't present, could have happened when you uploaded maybe?
Ana (Chapter 14) - Fri 29 Nov 2013
I loved it!!! I abslutly loved it <3
there are no words! Plase update soon *-*
Oh...my...GODDESS!!!!!!!!! I Love your story :) I can't wait for your next update.
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