kim123 (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Mar 2010

PLEASE DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY I REALLY  LIKE IT PLEASE CONTINUE! KUDASAI! PLEASE! T_______T


His Lady (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Mar 2009
this chapter reminds me of a show i used to watch called 'Soulfood' it came on BET it just still might...but it happened to one of the character's where his dead girlfriend came back to haunt him, this is a sad fate for anyone no one deserves this....but please continue soon

Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
um are you serious? great writer but your story needs to have a better plot. i'm guessing it will all becoem clear once you get out more chapters but i am not sure.

RayRay (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Feb 2009

Wow, this is an amazing story. I was thinking Inuyasha might have something mental going on as I got part-way through the second chapter and it was only confirmed towards the end. I loved it though, it wasn't what I was expecting and I can't wait to read more!


Yukino Sohma (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Feb 2009

Inuyasha's story is so sad. I was crying by the end. life is so fucked up sometimes. Thanks for continuing the one shot. It was really good.


sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
somehow, this really disturb me, does it happened? apparently, since you wrote it based on a real life event... i always thought that these can be happening to our lives, but somehow i might never truly believed that, until now... i really should be more aware... anyway, this is a great chapter, although i'm very happy that you decided to write again, i'm truly sorry about the lay offs, i guess the economic downturn really hurt us all...

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
This is a wonderful story. It's very poignant and sad for everyone involved. I read chapter 1 and liked how you portrayed Sess's emotions and feelings. In chapter 2, I was blown away about Yasha's mental state. I didn't see that coming. I hope that in future chapters, Kags gets better and is able to have children. What exactly did happen to Hojo? I take it that Sess had him removed from this world permanently? Great writing and plot. Lots of *hugs and smiles*.

Saholia (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Feb 2009

Wow, this chapter's so emotional and deep. I like your portrayal of Inuyasha and how his mind refused to accept reality. I hope to read more from this.

lol--I do believe I was one of those begging for a second ch! xD


sess and kagome fan (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
I really enjoyed this chapter. You showed Sesshomaru's weak moment, then you showed him getting back to the Sesshomaru we all know and love. On another site, I read a review where the reviewer had asked you to almost rewrite the whole chapter by giving more background. I think how you started and ended this chapter was perfect. If you are a true Sesshomaru fan, you know what his personalty is like. I am glad that you did not change this chapter when you wrote it for this site. PLEASE continue, I cannot wait to read the outcome.

sess and kagome fan (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
I really enjoyed this chapter. You showed Sesshomaru's weak moment, then you showed him getting back to the Sesshomaru we all know and love. On another site, I read a review where the reviewer had asked you to almost rewrite the whole chapter by giving more background. I think how you started and ended this chapter was perfect. If you are a true Sesshomaru fan, you know what his personalty is like. I am glad that you did not change this chapter when you wrote it for this site. PLEASE continue, I cannot wait to read the outcome.

arielle langley (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Sep 2008
wow! thats all i can say is wow this story is so good! please do not make it into a one shot and just continue this as a regular story its soo good! thanks so much for writing this. and if you are making this into a story please i beg of you update asap! thanks again

(Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Sep 2008
you have to continue this!! or even extend it both ways, back it up and start earlier and continue on, Mush!!! *^_^*

Vicious Grin (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
Wow. As much as I would love to see this as a full blown story, its a very moving oneshot that taps right into the heart. I think you should add more to it...only if you want... :]

helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
ya gonna continue? it sounds really good....I hope a miracle could happen and Kaggy could get pregnant with Fluffy's kids....hey...are they youkai, hanyou, and miko in this story? I would doubt it because you would think they could smell if she was lying.

Oh Please (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
This was very tasteful and interesting. You handled her abuse without dragging us through the grit of it and this is how it would be from his point of view. I admit, I didn't think it would be Hojo. but I'm seriously glad it was not Sess who raped her, which is what I feared by the tone at the beginning. I find myself wishing there was another chapter.

WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
Wow. That was dark, intense and not what I was expecting. Could you make a sequel? It was just too short and sweet... needs a part 2.

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