oh wow. delicious!
Because i like this sesshoumaru.
Oh this is very gooood. An inverse take of the naraku take kags and sesh as prisioners and force them to have sex. Never read rape on the men POV. Look foward to the character and story dev. ;)
Please update more frequently than once upon a full moon~ eheh~
I always feel I could read your stories in 1 take even if it means a no-sleeper night *-*
The fauvism was used in Kagura's kimono and how it looked against her skin and hair, right?
I really enjoyed this chapter. You do introspection great and you know just how to sprinkle enough action in it to make it not boring.
Thanks for sharing. Update soon!
I can taste Sesshoumaru's vehemence, feel Kagome's unwanted lust.
Brilliant, bloody brilliant.
Dark! Dark! Dark! Dark! Dark!
I love it! I just love it. This is beautiful!
Well, I noticed a couple mistakes, a missing coma and something else I forgot. But nothing too bad or experience ruining.
Love it and I can't wait for your next update.
Shaneka (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Oct 2013
This is the begining of an excellent story, can't wait for the next update.
erika (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Oct 2013
I really enjoyed this and look forward to the continuation of the story....please update soon
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Luna C. (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Oct 2013
This was interesting... it was very intense.
I can't wait for your next update.
this story is very interesting to me captivated
Okay...take a deep breath...slowly...in...out...relax now. That was intense.
I normally don't like dark fics, but this...your writing is fantastic! (fav'd)
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