Oh my !! You got me with this story .I was commuting by metro from work to home and I decided to find something to read , I was laughing with this chapter with all those poems and Sesshomaru comments . great job ; I love your story idea ...thanks for sharing .Hope to see a update soon :D
Beautiful work, relax your English is Good!
Nice cadence and pace too.
Love the work smile ok the world is all to willing to beat you up... So just roll ok it's very Good!!!
Cait (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 May 2017
Your English very good! Your sentences, grammar, and spelling are even better than some of the native English speaking writers I have read. Fantastic story telling! Keep it up. :-)
Andrea (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Oct 2014
Where is the rest damm it T-T more i want more. A beutiful work please keep it coming
Lucille (Chapter 3) - Fri 05 Sep 2014
Pls continue this :) it is very interesting! :D
Keep it coming, Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
*screams* OMG I am so excited to read more of this story!!!!! I am going to just lay here and hum a tune until you update. * begins humming Sess theme and then glares after 20 minutes* Well? Hurry up will ya!!
Will we soon find out how the Western Lands became bankrupt? Please continue the story!
Mimiru (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Feb 2014
xDD i do hope that Sesshomaru knows what hes getting himself into.So everyone thinks hes going to be a cheater, like his father was? He killed all the females that disrespected him LOL god such a sesshomaru move.
I think that little flying blob was cute, poor solider. Though i do feel bad for Miroku and Hiko they became pack mules.
I can't wait till the next chapter! :3 update soon.
jewel (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Feb 2014
“My lady! Please, do not do that. Milord will not be pleased.”, cried a woman, clad in a simple brown yukata and a white apron. Her big, brown eyes, normally looking bored, were now bright and terrified and scared as hell, as she followed her lady through the long corridors in the great castle of the Shogun.
The word bright was misspelled.
Cinno (Chapter 2) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
Please update soon i can't wait to see what happens
George (Chapter 2) - Tue 01 Oct 2013
A fresh idea! And it's off to a good start.
Can't wait to read some more.
Keep it coming.
Mimiru (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Sep 2013
Really a good start.
I can't seem to fin out who the bigger pervert is, Kagome, or Miroku? hmm...
Either way i loved it and i hope you continue, i can wait to find out where you will go with your story.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Can't wait to read more. :)
Kitchell (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Sep 2013
Can't wait to read the next chapter! It is very well written. I would have never guessed English isn't your first language. Great job!!
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