OMG I'm in love with this chapter! What a tease! Lol. This was getting sooooooo goood! im glad Sesshy has self control because that could have ended messy. Lol I hope that Sesshy gets rid of the thought of turning her into something he's not you know? Kag and Sesshy could have a long lasting relationship if he just let go of the idea of currupting her. Lol GREAT JOB with this wonderful story I can't wait for the next update!!!
It's been a while since I've left you a review, and I felt that one was due. ^^
I'm impressed with your character development. Especially, in our dear Kagome's case. I love how you made her this insecure girl, still wet behind the ears, with normal fears and self-doubt. It's thrilling to see how she adapts to the situations forced upon her, how she grows mentally, and learns that not all things are black or white, that there is no reason why she must be one thing and cannot be another at the same time, that purity doesn't mean chastity.
Sesshomaru is as deliciously evil as he has alays been. His transformation is more subtle, but undeniable, nonetheless. The more he entagles himself with this woman, the more he starts to understand that humans are not labels, but actual people with feeling, and unpredictable in their reactions. He expects to see darkness in everything, but 'tis not how the real world works, and much like Kagome he must now accept this.
Your writing is as beautiful as ever, it flows, and I never say that easily. Wonderfully descriptive, and expressive. You make me empathize with all characters, make them real, full fledged people I can relate with, even the villains. Amazing! Well done!
Congrats on your nomination, too! It was well desrved, and I wish you the best on the awards!
Looking forward to more soon, yes?
Sesshomaru is just so evil!!! It fits him so well and this story is amazing!
please update soon...can't wait to see what happens
iin (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
woa...a jealousy sessy? thanks for update
Koi (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
This is soooo good. I can't wait until the next update. I wonder how sesshy will handle his new found feelings for kag??
Andreaa (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
Ahhh what a great chapter!! Am I the only one hoping Onigumo returns as Naraku wanting to take Kagome away from
Seashomaru? >.>
sesshy ALWAYS get what he wants. naraku
Really Sesshomaru....hasn't he figured out that Kagome would be appalled to learn that he incited the villagers to kill Onigumo and he allowed her harm before "saving" her?
Poor Kagome, right now, even though Sesshomaru has admitted he has feelings for her, he believes he can "teach" her his lessons and change her. It seems as if he still thinks of her as a pawn still.
I do enjoy your story line though and cannot wait for the next chapter. Maybe we can see Kikyo and Inuyasha in the next few chapters!!!!
s_spina (Chapter 14) - Tue 21 Jan 2014
I second satuross review! :p
s_spina (Chapter 14) - Tue 21 Jan 2014
but where has Sesshoumaru gone??
great story!
Lemons next chapter hehehe
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