Loving it, keep it coming.

I love it ^.^ it's quite good

I love it ^.^ it's quite good

its going rather well. the story is developing  a bit faster and better.  keep up the good work :)

How long before he learns that a true leader serves the people, not the other way around do ya think? Isn't it funny that his dispised little brother with no one to lead but his ragtag pack is a better leader than the noble born son? I am loving this. I can't wait to see how you grow his character in spite of his selfish, hard headed ways.

I'll review!! I love this idea. Haven't come across one that's so wonderfully written! I wonder if Inuyasha's would will get a bit stronger in that it'll force Sesshoumaru to see how the group works when he shows hints of inuyasha?

honestly, I am confused to how come he cannot simple say he is not Inuyasha? and how is this going to make Kagome fall in love with Sesshoumaru? If she is thinking this is Inuyasha and what happens when Kikyou shows up?

This is really good. Can't wait til the next update.

I really like this. Keep up the great work.  Another chp please.  

its really good  the beginning was a bit hazy, but it seems like you're getting better.  the speed of the story is getting a little bit faster, which is good.   i like how we are able to see how different inuyasha and sesshoumaru are.  its really good overall  and please continue :)

Loving both chapters, keep it coming.

OOOHHH!!! I bet I know why the sword won't work. Kagome KNOWS in her soul and heart that he is NOT Inuyasha. He better shape up or when Inuyasha gets his body back he will have no pack and a broken spine, if Kagome doesn't purify him first. Or Miroku 'accidentally' open his wind tunnel in the dope's general direction. Maybe Shippo shouls 'play' with him a bit.

I think you kept them in charachter quite well. Also, i don't think she's selfish, just young and for all the drama and pain, she still believes in fairy tales and happily ever after. Wanting to be seen and loved and accepted for who she is isn't selfish, its human, and i believe kagome is all too human for her own heart's good.

Can't get enough, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

All three chapters are great, keep it coming.

the switch is on! can't wait to read another update :) this is getting interesting and like what u wrote the characters

i love this story.   sesshoumaru seems to be a bit bratty,  but it seems to fit well with this plot line.   and that thing about kagome,  its true.  shes just a normal girl who is kinder than most.    just because  shes nive to everyone doesnt mean shes the purest being ever and that will instantly make her the most powerful being ever.    it does irk me a bit when people immediately assume that (even though its just an anime)                 great story and please continue :)

I agree with your view of Kagome. It's the normal individuals who choose to be extraordinary that I find to be the ones worth listening to and watching.

Great introduction, i likie this. Can't wait for the next one :)