Hello,

I don't believe you have to practice writing lemons, because you did a good job! I loves how it started with a rather dominant Sesshoumaru and turned into an interaction, where Kagome controlled things! Seeing Sesshoumaru in such passion, that he couldn't speak correctly was hot!

And am I the only one that noticed, that Kagome actually never agreed to his total ownership?! *grins evilly* Sesshoumaru said that he belongs to Kagome, but Kagome didn't say it back!!! It seems that Sesshoumaru was too distracted to notice ;) So Kagome,  you are free to do whoever you want, hahaha!!!

All in all a really nice and hot one shot! I would like to read more of them!

Short and sweet....I must say that I liked it alot....who would have thought?  Lord Sesshoumaru coming apart at the seams!! 

This was HOT!!

Short and spicy. I love the interaction between them in this scene, it was not one dimensional, both of them participated, and I like the coy Kagome.