Keep it coming.
This has me intrigued, killing Kohaku right off the bat by what appears to be Sesshomaru who you've painted as the antogonist no less. Also, the part where they said he died already raises questions in mind, such as, is this Naraku/Onigumo in disguise or is it really Sesshomaru? On a side note, I really enjoyed your brief description of the clouds, mountain, and the environment. Gave it a fantastical sort of feeling. Keep it rolling!
Wow!! Talk about being sucker-punched in the gut!! O_O As I sometimes say, this a "gripping" story. Pls update soon lest you do away with our sanity by keeping us waiting.. :P
~Voracious
Wow! That is an amazing twist. Nice chapter can't wait for the next one.
Keep it coming.
The story sounds very interesting, and I hope you update soon, can't wait to see how it develops.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Mother's Day!
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