Keep it coming.
I love this story! I normally am not a big fan of crossovers but I like the way you managed to make the characters all fit together, though it does get a tad confusing when there's so much people from different fandoms.
Also, this might just be a random thing but have you ever read "Titus Andronicus"? I was just in a rogue production of it and I can't help but notice that what happened to Lavinia (the main character's daughter in the Shakesperean play) happened to the death eater. It's just something that I noticed since we did it Friday and it's fresh in my mind.
Okay the beginning was good, and I was interested in finding out how things would work with Sesshomaru being a landlord and all, but now I am lost. Harry Potter? some little ghost???? some girl that she met just moves in too... You started losing me with Orihime moving in, and totally lost me with Harry, Draco and Luna getting there... as well as he is friends with dumbledoor... I have kept on reading hoping I would catch up, but I just can't. I wish you well... and may check on it every now and then, but I have to stop reading now.
Keep it coming.
Crystal (Chapter 19) - Mon 08 Apr 2013
You wrote Ichigo not Malfoy. I love your story so far, but I do think you're adding way too many characters for you to have to keep track of. It's a lot of people to keep remembering about. Though I do like the fact that you're pulling all different magical and mystical creatures together.
All five chapters are great, keep it coming.
oh my gosh...my sides...they..hurt, wow that was great
Tasha (Chapter 17) - Sun 07 Apr 2013
Oh man, I've fallen in love with this story. Please continue soon ^w^
Tilayha (Chapter 13) - Fri 05 Apr 2013
I am so looking forward to Kagome and Sesshoumaru's introduction into the Soul Reaper World. Thank you.
Keep it coming.
sasa (Chapter 13) - Fri 05 Apr 2013
Did kagome just giveup a part of her soul again ? please tell me she didn't.
Your story is sooooo good I love it. And it's not confusing. Really good I can't wait until more!
amari (Chapter 12) - Fri 05 Apr 2013
loving this story thanks for the fast updates.
Keep it coming.
All six chapters are great, keep it coming.
I not going to read this story again after I read this chapter, I'm just bored with it. I'm not into fanfction anymore, so bye. APRIL FOOL'S!
I like this.
i have always wanted to read something like this.
but I seem to never come across many of it.
so when I found this I was elated.
i could read something different with a different universe tied in and the main pairing will be between Kagome and Sesshomaru.
*sigh*
why couldn't I have the same interesting, adventourous and romantic life that Kagome seems to have in the many fanfictions out there.
anyway...
open your imagination and let your creative juices flow so thare your readers could enjoy the same well written and well crafted story you have started.
GOOD LUCK!
Keep it coming, Happy Easter Sunday.
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
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