You need a beta.

Ok waaaaayyy too much feels for the first one maan. DAMN

I'm glad you updated this story after a year and months, great chapters. Keep it coming, Happy Belated Thanksgiving and a Merry Christmas

will there be a sequal too this?

It.... is just so sad. :((

Aww...  what a cute/hot/tragic lil' story. I really liked it. Good Job!!

This story sounds interesting, it's sad that Sesshomaru die, keep it coming.