This story is interesting, keep it coming.
What oh! Looks like Menomaru just started a nasty war! LOL! 
So far the story is very interesting, and has lots of places to go. First chapter is very attention grabbing. 
I look forward to seeing where you take this. 
~Starfyre 
      
Oooohhhh an interesting start, Nami!!! I can't wait to read more on the secret plans of Menomaru and Kaguya! Poor Sess...he can't take this lying down! He must fight!! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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